BeyondTheForbidden [2011-09-27 00:37:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that sure was an interesting and awesome story! Now I wish that you and Charlene will find each other one day...Or, something else epic, I don't know. XP Either way, it was very good! For a second, I thought in the end that Charlene would get pregnant and has amnesia! But, I don't think a calf would survive such a hard blow. And, too bad Skipper and Marlene's relationship ended...well, at least it was on a good note...Well, loved the story, my friend! And I await more if you have any ideas or something. XP But, now I'm also curious of that male dolphin may play in the future...
Great job! Keep it up! Kudos! Peace out! XD
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TheEmptiestOfElegies [2011-09-26 15:33:58 +0000 UTC]
Oh, snow cones are MUCH more important than Alice. Heheh. Nice ending! I didn't expect Charlene to live. *whispers* Watch out for the fangirl swarm! XD
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