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overfiend-87 [2009-12-21 13:59:02 +0000 UTC]

very nice. I love the position in which they're standing too.

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dragol [2009-12-19 03:29:28 +0000 UTC]

Tall people are tall.
That because he is a ninja...

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S-Guy [2009-12-01 04:55:19 +0000 UTC]

Those are some good glasses right there.

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Galactusworldeater [2009-11-30 05:06:22 +0000 UTC]

cool

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Flamefire123 [2009-11-29 09:41:27 +0000 UTC]

Awh, how cute!

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indartlover [2009-11-28 23:45:29 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, the contrast of him being in black and her in bright pink. Another great piece of art.

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NikiPaprika [2009-11-28 23:38:07 +0000 UTC]

Okay, since dA doesn't allow us unsubbed people to leave "real critiques" as they like to define, despite them trying to be an art site, and claim that they're not all about drama and lulz...*sighs*

Anyways, I quite like this, but a few things to point out:
His head is very small in comparison to the body. i understand if you tried to make it look like its in some sort of distorted perspective, but considering the width of the shoulders and waist, the head is far to small. Either the head needed to be bigger, or the shoulders to be slimmer, depending on what kind of angle or perspective you're going for.
As for teh lady, the glasses on her bug me, since they seem to look like they're bending inwards on the left eye, as if they were curving around her face.
I like the detail in her hair, though a few highlights would really bring it out.
Akay, other than that, pretty awesome <3

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DJW-Wildways [2009-11-28 23:05:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks mate, they look great, cheers

-Dalmonite: they're both characters from a pair of comic miniseries I wrote when I tried getting into doing my own comics, bloke on the right is from a martial arts comic am still working on while the young lass in the glasses is the 'secret identity' of a superhero comic I sell here in the UK at comic cons, so to cut a long story short, a pair of OC's

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Dalmonite [2009-11-28 23:02:06 +0000 UTC]

Who are they?

Anyway, it looks good.

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babydevilkilly [2009-11-28 22:51:34 +0000 UTC]

that chich looks like me....

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