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Name: Lesaga BewahrTrollian handle: [AA] AmateurArtist
Age: 6.92 sweeps (calculator used : [link] )
Gender: female
Blood caste: Cerulean Blue
Hive: A hollow giant tree stump ( [link] )
Modus: Rune Modus ( Mix of Pictionary and Memory)
Strife specibus: Featherkind
Symbol: A feather
Land:
Consort:
Moon: Prospit
God Tier: Seer of Void
Matesprit: none
Moirail: none
Kismesis: none
Auspistice: none
Lusus: Chameleon Beast ( Cham-dad)
Ancestor: The Chronicler , The Keeper of Secrets, The Preserver of Truths, Destroyer of Lies
([link] )
Beforan Counterpart: Helena/Aneleh(Still thinking of a name) Bewahr
Prototypings:
Personality: Lesaga is often absentminded and slow,she is oblivious to many things, although especially she should be able to see the secret things. She is braver than she looks and although quiet at first she will be the loudest in the end. she tries to get along with everyone.
Quirk: She starts and ends everything with =-= ,which is not a frown but a symbol for an open book to her. Uses "..." very often and capitalizes f as the big F looks like a feather to her.
Quote: "=-= Hello... i believe we didn't meet yet,did we? I am Lesaga Bewahr...i...I believe it be as Fate that we met right now... yes...yes a pleasure to meet you... =-= "
A little bit of Story: Lesaga Bewahr lives with her Cham-dad a giant Chameleon beast Lusus that has 6 legs. She is as low as her Lusus ,who feeds itself by hunting and catching flying prey. Ever so often she gets the remains of its feast, which are mostly feathers or a legs or wing. Lesaga is befriended with Khaose a Teal blood that tends to do underground fashion shows? However it is his fault that she now wears a vest.
Rune Modus: Instead of drawing the object you want to captchalogue you have to draw runes. The Card will show you wish rune is needed and then you have to draw the same rune. However the card will not show the object but the Rune ,you have to memorize what is under the rune ,or simply guess when you need the object. Usually this would be problematic for most,even for Lesaga herself ,but once time processes ,it would be an easy thing for a Seer of void,to guess which rune holds which object.
Strife Specibus: Featherkind to fight with that you draw specific Runes which do certain effects,however you don't know many runes and hope to discover more.
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I never made a fantroll before by the way her name is a mix of Hel and Sága . Hel means "one who covers up or hides something" and Sága means "to see" but can also mean Seer. The Seer that sees hidden things?
Helsaga was too long so i swapped Hel and removed the H ,the Beforan counterpart is named Helena . Furthermore Bewahr is the german word for 'preserve' ,'Keep' .
If you want to roleplay just pm me here or hit me on Pesterchum
A bit critique could be needed!
Lesaga Bewahr and the Ancestor belong to me.
Homestuck belongs to Andrew Hussie
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Comments: 26
Hello!
First off I want to start with your trolls physical appearance- I like her hair a lot; it’s super cute! She is a bit young to have so much pigment in her eyes though; maybe make it a bit more on the dark grey/blue side? Not really a huge deal anyway. Her outfit almost borderlines on the “too much color side” but it is acceptable (maybe more black and less white- white would stand out a bit and cause trouble; black blends better); I like the geometric flow of the outfit; ties nicely with the feather strife. On her horns, is the blue a ribbon tied in or are they actually blue? If the blue is actually there I have to tell you that’s not really possible, unless you can back the mutation.
Her name isn’t bad and follows the 6x6 rule (which is good) but it’s a bit hard to say; doesn't flow you know? (I do like the thought you put into it though- so you definitely don’t have to change it) I don’t know how the feather design ties into her character- being that her lusus is a Chameleon; the whole design of the character should be influenced by her lusus. As for the hive; it’s not bad but I expected more a tree “top” than “trunk” ; the biome should be some sort of tropical rainforest- seeing as most of the worlds chameleons live in Madagascar (fun fact just for you ;u
As for her dancestor- some names I think would suit better are Mutati, (comes from the word mutatio which means change in Latin- for the fact that chameleons change their color) Misceo, Miscui, Mixtum , (all mean blend in Latin) Lacert, or Acerta (derive from Lacerta- meaning lizard) The thought you put into it is nice- but sounds too human.
I think her personality ties with her lusus better than her design and strife seeing as she is “slow” and “absentminded”; I also like how you say she starts quiet and becomes loud- makes me think of a blending chameleon turning vibrant or clashing with the background or surroundings if that makes sense. For a bit of her physical you could make her appear overlooked but when finally noticed you see a certain vibrancy or glow about her. I don’t know just an idea, hehe.
Her quirk could use some work; the "…" works for her slowness but the face at end and beginning seem a bit random. You could try to incorporate ~ in there like a tail or tongue maybe? Quirks are difficult and take a lot of work…
Her strife is a bit hard to understand- could use some work… I don't really see how you could accurately fight with a feather and runes; but I suppose there are magical properties at play that would help (like Rose's needles)
I think I touched base on all the important points of this troll! I like her design thus fore and can definitely see her becoming really great as you improve- good first fantroll definitely!
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SO many words.
Hmm to her name i can say it perfectly well , probably cause i speak it differently than you. I am German so i think a bit different when it comes to words. To me it flows perfectly fine ^^'
to her outfit,yes i know it may be a bit too bright,but i want to stay out a tad bit with my designs a plain black shirt is a bit boring to me. Also her friend is some underground model of sorts and probably made her wear this vest. She just wears it cause it is warm. So sometimes she could be seen without it. And yes those are just blue ribbons.
I actually didn't use the lusus to design her,but her titel Seer of Void. Her aspect the aspect of void shrouds everything in secrets.I know she kinda counters it with her vest. However the Void aspect ties the Lusus to her,as it hides itself as well. Furthermore a Seer i a person that sees visions and most likely will write the visions down. One of the first things used were feather quills and thus the feathers. Also her Lusus loves flying lusus for lunch. Sometimes she gets the remains....
And yeah her Strife uses magic like Rose's...i thought Runes would kinda imply this....
Well yeah..
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Oh haha well that's totally fine and makes sense since you are German for the name.
It's good you are able to back this all pretty well and I get what you are saying from her aspect- but the aspect derives from their personality and what you need to work on so maybe it should be a little less direct from that :/ ...I'm not trying to force anything but a lot of the troll does come down to his or her lusus- so just keep that in mind
Hope what I had to say was helpful lol
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Well i was unable to find a 'Theme'
The theme of the canon trolls is 'Zodiac' Thus each resembles a zodiac and thus has a fitting lusus ,symbol,quirk and name. I was unable to find one.
I mean Alchemy is kinda overused. I could have used the alchemy symbol for air/wind and call her Levita ,which would be deprived from Levitation . For example..so yeah XD
So i kinda escaped to 'Seer' i knew it was lame..everyone just wants to change it...
Yeah it was i suppose
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If it helps for the next fantroll you use a lot of people use different constellations and the myths and facts behind them to design fantrolls- for example my fantroll derives from the constillation Phoenix. You by no way have to do this- it just makes it a bit easier I suppose.
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I doubt i will make anymore fanstuff...too much of a hassle to please anyone XD
Nah,we will see.
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I believe making a fantroll is more about pleasing yourself- you don't really have to share it around as long as your are satisfied yourself ;u; what's the fun in it if it's only for others?
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Ah true tht,but when you have something you like and proud of,wouldn'T you also like to show it..around and see what others think..maybe to improve?
Not to get changed but to improve.
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Yes this is true too; just have to find a healthy balance :3
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Aye~ which i hellish dificult!
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But you do a good job,don't worry~
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Featherkind of going to be a difficult weapon to work with, trolls need something that can kill other trolls, meaning it's sharp or can damage them fatally.
And is her dancestor named Helena? Keep in mind it's a human name ;w; so something like Aneleh ( Backwards ) could work >U>
She looks really cool though wow
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Well i will post her room soon and i believe that it makes it more clear how well she could use it as weapon. I mean since Alternia has giant beasts ,it would probably have giant birds with big feathers.Why not some that could be used as staff?
But staff was so boring so i tried feather instead and it could have other uses in future. Just an idea.
Hmm backwards it would still work. It actually doens'T sound so bad . Thank for the kind words and help
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This is pretty cool! ^^
But maybe you want to change 'Got Tiger' to 'God Tier'?
I like how her name matches with her god tier.
I suppose you didn't really take the lusus into her context. Since she seems to have feathers all over her, I kind of expected the lusus to be a bird of some sort.
Her strife specibus is also a little confusing for me.
But her personality seems interesting and I really like her outfit! ^^
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Well i was like.."Jeez birds..birds everywhere...."
they are everywhere..so i thought..let's take a reptile since reptiles are what? Right they are relatives of birds..OR so scientists said.
I mean there were dinosaurs with feathers. Furthermore he is an amateur artist ,the chameleon being absentminded and changing its colors,would fit an absentminded artist of sorts. But i kinda wanted her Lusus to be counterproductive of sorts...Well it hunts and eats flying Lusus,how else did she got the feathers?
And yeah i guess her specibus is...confusing but she uses feathers or rather feather quills to draw runes . She uses 'magic'
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Hm, I see. Yeah, having too much of something can be pretty overwhelming, I guess.
And I can see how the lusus matches with her personality now.
Oh, and you changed 'Got Tiger' to 'God Tiger'. I really doubt you mean to say a huge cat of sorts, so it should really be 'God Tier'. ^^
And okay, so she uses magic. Hm, I guess that works.
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Gna XD I edite again. Now it should work.
Well like Rose used Needle-wands to use her power, Lesaga uses magic runes drawn with her feather to draw out her power.
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Ahaha. Yes I believe it's all good now.
And yeah, I can understand that. It's just that I didn't expect magic to come in before they came in contact with the game.
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Well she could usually throw them like darts XD
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Aha. That's true. There are many uses for them depending on the person.
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The strongest weapon is creativity
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