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Hjernedaud [2011-04-15 17:29:25 +0000 UTC]

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Hi!
Thanks a lot for asking me to write a comment on your drawing!

I think the drawing is very cute, and it gives me a happy feeling inside. The colors fit well together, and their faces are adorable!

I think the pose could looks more alive, and maybe they could stand a bit closer. A couple will look even more loveydovey if they stand closer ^^

You did a good job on the shading, but try to make even darker and lighter shades. Look at the nature and people around you, get to know how shadows and highlights looks like!

I hope this helped, and if you got more questions please don't hesitate to ask ^^

- *FMP-lover

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Inosha [2011-03-04 10:57:50 +0000 UTC]

Hey there!

I really loved the idea of this piece. So sweet! I agree with you, it is super cute!
I would give you one word of suggestion, though. The poses look a tad bit lifeless. But don't you worry, with more practise, I'm sure you'll get much better!

Let me give you a personal piece of advice. First, find a newspaper or magazine or anything in that league. Then, select a random pose and draw it. try and do at least one picture in two days. Slowly, but steadily you'll find that you can draw various poses out of your comfort zone AND they'll look less lifeless and portray the feelings in your art much better.

Secondly, experiment with shading. Now, getting the hang of shading will be difficult at first, but again the key to this is OBSERVE! Observe your surroundings, you'll understand the knack behind shadows and lighting.

Keep all this in mind, and you will be zipping on your way to improvement!
All that said, this is a great drawing! Well done!

Regards,
Inosha

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leeladebris [2011-02-28 01:39:57 +0000 UTC]

is that Luffy

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