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Published: 2019-04-04 04:20:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 455; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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GOOD MORNING IN THAILAND! Abis VentiosumenseteHe is my close species : Bergbokk ! [Name in African is a goat that living on mountain.]
Ventiosumensete is red bananas in African that can't eat. So, that make his skin cover by poison of fruit. If you don't have anti-body of poison, you can't touch him!!?
I hope you like him
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Hi, I’m here from ProjectComment!
First, I feel like I should let you know I’m colorblind – so if I misread some of the color details you gave these piece, that could be the cause. It’s also why I won’t delve too deeply into your color choices. J
This looks like a really interesting character, and I like how much detail and thought you put into his creation. His proportions all look good, and I like how you captured his hair, the style of which can be kind of hard to convey if not done right. The lighter colors form a bit of a halo around him, which is a fantastic way to frame the rest of him given the dark colors used throughout.
I only have a few comments/considerations to offer, but please feel free to brush them aside if these are simply stylistic choices you made. It wouldn’t be the first time I didn’t get what someone was trying to do! First, his forearms are drawn in a way that I’m not sure whether they’re supposed to be his own, or they’re gauntlets he’s wearing. If they are supposed to be gloves/gauntlets, I would suggest making a hard line between them and his elbows so the viewer can realize they’re not a part of his body.
Second, I feel like the same could be done for his ears. His cheekbones comes well in front of his ears, so you could get away with having a heavier line of demarcation between the two – right now, with his right ear (our left), it looks like his ear in coming straight out of his cheek. If you don’t want to add a line, making the ears darker would probably work to set them further back as well.
Okay, that’s all I have, but if there was anything you were hoping to get a comment on that I missed, just let me know and I’ll try to swing back for another look.
Kevin
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Thank you for your suggestion! I think your comment is interesting. And, some comment can develop my art in the next piece!
Don't worry about your colorblind. I know how hard to seen the color but I think it's special because the art not only the color. there are line, shape and shade that you can seen and can feeling for considering art!
So, Don't worry. I don't mind about it. Maybe that interested thing that can make a shade tone in smooth,too.
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You're very welcome! Keep up the good work!
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This is gorgeous! I love the design, the colours work so well together too!
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