Comments: 21
anyoukhanna [2013-11-23 03:23:03 +0000 UTC]
hey there i love ur drawing, i was wondering if i could use it in a project for school, i have to trace it out on the computer and this would be perfect, however i don't want to "steal" ur work ...i would right ur name on it and everything...
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SingleCoreMaverick [2012-03-06 05:50:34 +0000 UTC]
Just what I see:
--the left bicep is a bit small compared to the right, right looks more natural;
--the face seems to be looking in the wrong direction, I'm thinking the alignment should be more towards the start of the left side of the W in the necklace;
--the expression of the face looks too manly, too bold for a woman;
--having the lasso going 'through' the forehead makes me think: "mental floss";
++the detail in the muscles are spot on(!);
++hair seems to flow just as properly as the body;
Overall, great practice run!!
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dtor91 In reply to SingleCoreMaverick [2012-03-06 20:45:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.
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AnUnstoppableForce In reply to dtor91 [2012-03-15 20:35:56 +0000 UTC]
I would like to say that I agree with his critique except for one thing. I don't think her expression is too bold, but I do think you could soften up the jaw a bit.
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gwdill [2012-03-05 09:20:07 +0000 UTC]
Well done!
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dtor91 In reply to gwdill [2012-03-06 05:02:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
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dtor91 In reply to TheLordDarkWolf [2012-02-24 22:29:59 +0000 UTC]
I think I'm going to copy it and then color it.
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renstar71 [2012-02-19 08:21:57 +0000 UTC]
beautiful!
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dtor91 In reply to renstar71 [2012-02-23 05:19:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
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adampedrone8 [2012-02-18 21:31:11 +0000 UTC]
I would work on making the hands a little bigger, then ink it. then color it. then sell prints. ver good.
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dtor91 In reply to adampedrone8 [2012-02-19 03:36:10 +0000 UTC]
Ha, sounds like a plan. I agree about the hands, and I feel her head is slightly small. But speaking of inking and coloring, I'm thinking of light boxing it, make a Copic marker drawing out of the copy, and maybe put in Photoshop if I'm feeling confident enough about it and enhancing. Basically I want to try out the Adam Hughes approach.
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Thetimebear [2012-02-17 20:47:35 +0000 UTC]
Excellent work! The proportions are nearly spot on.
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