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Duetter — Black to Gold
Published: 2007-08-27 23:55:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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No need to pull me downI'm already falling on my own
but someone's waiting down for me
Ready to catch me
To get me up on my feet
Not everyone's like you
Laughing as I scream
Watching as I bleed
I can see through your eyes
As they reveal the world inside you
I see no soul, no blood, no life
A burnt of piece of coal
Replaces what should be your "heart"
Despite my hate for you
I don't wish for your death
I pray that one day you'd learn
From those people with wings
Maybe then
The black halo that you burden
Would turn into gold
Because in my crazy theory I believe
That somewhere inside that piece of coal
Hides a pumping heart
Waiting to breakout
And the dark cloud
Following you
Would soon disappear
It's all in your hands
To make that heart strong
To push away that cloud
You can try to pull me down
But I'll be standing on my feet
Waiting for your halo to glow
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Comments: 2
Good. I'm really bad at writing free verse (or whatever you call non-rhyming) poetry. I have to have rhyming or it turns out like shit. But this is good and descriptive and has a positive-ish message.
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Thanks....i'dlike yo check youe stuff...i tried to but i saw nothing, i'll check again
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