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Published: 2011-09-22 16:37:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1283; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description My first shot of Jim - a good friend
just learning portraits now
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JustJusti [2012-01-10 05:24:19 +0000 UTC]

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Hi there!
I've been asked by the group "Snazzy Photography" to have a look at and of course rate your work. The rating they have set is: 1 --> Bad & 10 --> good (I would usually say "Awesome, Beautiful, and/or magnificent").
I would rate your work a 9! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> It's super awesome!
I like how the photo has captured the emotion and mood of what is going on, and also the male's facial features. I also love & like how the background has been faded, leaving only the main vector in focus for our eyes to follow. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

This picture is really, really good!!!!!!!!!!

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dukeofspade In reply to JustJusti [2012-01-10 21:04:04 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks a lot may i know what is the rating of my photo on the poll?
thanks a lot i really appreciate it

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Yoh-Boo [2012-01-12 18:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Your photo has been up for rating at and received an average voting of 6
For more information take a look at the poll here [link]

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surrealhorizon [2011-12-19 16:14:01 +0000 UTC]


Okay, so this is an okay portrait, though it probably won't be a portfolio shot for either of you.

On the bright side, the standard soft light and blurry backgrounds draw attention to the subject. My main critique is that it appears to be a just a picture of a shirtless boy. It lacks the visual intensity of a "drama portrait" or the personality of a "lifestyle portrait." You put in a lot of post-production effort to polish a shot that wasn't especially memorable to begin with.
This shot of yours [link] is stronger because it's visually simpler and the character shows more personality.

A note about the background: the shadow on his chest and a halo on his back look like imperfectly applied layer masks, some unnatural "wind noise" has been applied, and the whole background is evenly blurred. When blur results from optical properties of a lens, closer objects appear less blurred.

There's room to critique the color too--the bold blocks of green and sky-gray aren't helping your portrait. You'll also find that a visual horizon is usually distracting, especially if it runs through your subject.

I hope that helps! Return critiques are very welcome. Perhaps on this one? [link]

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LovelyLiar [2011-10-05 16:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done may I use this picture as drawing reference please?... I need some practice with male anatomy

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dukeofspade In reply to LovelyLiar [2011-10-07 02:49:40 +0000 UTC]

wow sure you can and please link me your drawing i love to see it

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claremanson [2011-09-23 05:27:34 +0000 UTC]

really makes me wonder what he is thinking

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dukeofspade In reply to claremanson [2011-09-23 09:51:08 +0000 UTC]

i think he's thinking of what will be his face in the photo

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youarenotalone2 [2011-09-22 21:46:17 +0000 UTC]

Great shot!

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dukeofspade In reply to youarenotalone2 [2011-09-23 09:50:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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youarenotalone2 In reply to dukeofspade [2011-09-27 05:11:11 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome

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