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DumplingMomo — Lullaby
Published: 2010-05-25 03:03:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 587; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 5
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Sing me something sweetTo put me to sleep at night
Under the stars or in your arms
Is where I want to fall asleep
Whisper in my ear
All the good thing's you hear
So I can sleep soundly
Without any nightmares
Sing me a lullaby
Made up of only sweet things
That you love about me
And that make you smile
Play me something beautiful
To calm the waves
Of my beating heart
It's about to burst
Sing me a lullaby
Of all the things
You've never wanted
To say
Play it beautifully
On your guitar
So only I can hear
Your voice
Sing me a lullaby
That I can fall asleep to
In your arms or under the stars
I'll sleep anywhere if you're there
So sing me a lullaby
From the bottom of your heart
That's filled with your love
And so much more
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Comments: 55
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I've never heard a lullaby piece like this
This truly was full of hope and simple sweet heart
I sport you a 4/5
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Ah, it was wrote for a friend,
and my best work is always written
about others.
Thanks.
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This is beautiful. I love the repetition and the rhythm works rather well. Great work.
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(Sorry this took a long time to reply back to 
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(Sorry this took a long time to reply back to
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You are very welcome...
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Very sweet it could be a song I'm not a big fan of the verse "I'll sleep any where if your there" It sorta throws the whole thing off..
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Oh? Why do you feel that way about that verse?
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Don't get me wrong your AMAZINGLY talented and this poem could win many awards in my opinion, but that verse does not go with the flow of the poem. ry reading it aloud and you'll see what I mean. Try phrasing what you wanted to say diffrently and for sure it'll flow better.
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Haha, alright, but I think it's fine o: I've been told it's my best and no one has said that that line doesn't fit 
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Ya haha it's just alittle thing I noticed but your poem is freakishly amazing so dont get me wrong keep it the way you want it I was just trying to give some friendly advice. 
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Haha, it's alright. I take all the friendly advice I can get now a days.
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This is...oh so sweet, but you manage for it to be sincere too! I love it!
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One of your best. It sings a sweet song with some pretty lines that touch the heart. A great love poem.
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Thanks! *Super duper
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Oh, I really like this! It makes me want to write music for the words!
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Thankies!
Do you write music?
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Sorta. I've written a couple little things. Not professionaly if that's what you mean
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But you still write stuff, so it's still awesome
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Your most welcome! :]
Excellent job.
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