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Published: 2013-05-14 15:18:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 892; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Description Practice of more close up environment. Critique is appreciated too thanks!
© Me, please respect that, thanks.
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Comments: 9

Morphona [2013-05-15 00:44:25 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic

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DwarvenSmith In reply to Morphona [2013-05-15 15:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Mokojoko [2013-05-14 22:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Looks great and I love the color and paint job, the only thing I would say is that the wall behind the artifact could be a little more defined, I can see what it is but it doesn't quite blend well with the surrounding frame .

I like the thick glowing effect surrounding the focus piece and you could possibly keep that by adding detail to the outer most parts of the glow near to the frame and slowly blend it into the glow.
You also could add more depth to the picture by adding a bit more values to the background.

I actually really like this but since you asked for critique I thought I could mention a few things. Hope it helps

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DwarvenSmith In reply to Mokojoko [2013-05-15 15:36:32 +0000 UTC]

it helps I will take a look into it. Not sure I want to keep painting on it, but I will be able to think about these things in the future. Thanks

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Meekochan [2013-05-14 18:23:29 +0000 UTC]

Great work. ^^
I don't know why (the reason is eluding me), but I keep thinking the area with the light should have more detail or be crisper/clearer.

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DwarvenSmith In reply to Meekochan [2013-05-14 19:06:49 +0000 UTC]

Aha! You do have a point there. Hmm, I will think about it. Thanks!

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NO-WAY-TO-LEAVE [2013-05-14 15:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Perfect work!

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DwarvenSmith In reply to NO-WAY-TO-LEAVE [2013-05-14 16:09:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh far from it I believe, but thanks! Warms the heart

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NO-WAY-TO-LEAVE In reply to DwarvenSmith [2013-05-14 16:22:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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