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Published: 2012-02-18 23:58:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1684; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 34
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Comments: 6
Cool sketch and stylish rendering. Few perspective/proportion issues at the rear though.
- the diffuser and the trunk (boot) vanishing lines are diverging
- the rear left wheel seems a LOT bigger and higher than the right one
- the rear window is too narrow and badly centered
Also make sure the colour patches you apply in your rendering communicate the shape effectively. The lower side panel is fairly confusing. Also, the horizon line on the side window should logically continue on the adjacent body panel. Good luck.
Lovely work though, I really like the emotion conveyed in the sketch. It looks natural.
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Thank you very much for the comment, it is highly appreciated
All the perspective issues i will try not to make in my coming sketches and renderings, so i will make more guide lines so i dont make the same mistakes again. The way the left rear wheel is just a try to make the car look more dynamic, but i have probably overdone it
The colour patches i really need to work on, so they describes the form better, but as this is the first time i'm trying this technique of making patches so some of them are not very good. Also you are completely rigth about the horizon line, really just a silly mistake
And also thank you for liking it
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