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ebonyrei — A world full of hate
Published: 2007-05-30 00:20:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 475; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 4
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Description This Burning Pain,
Like a heavy rain,
consantly pounding-
astounding.
Why is it here?
instilling fear...
I don't want to die,
Hear my cry!
Screaming, Shrieking,
Into the night,
likes flame surounding
Hell's evilest fright...
Come now to devour my soul,
eyes as black as the darkest coal.
I've done no wrong
to deserve this fate,
except live in this world
so full of hate...
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Comments: 30

Starboy16 [2007-06-17 00:59:37 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. I love this poem. Er...sorry for the late read, kinda busy for awhile...

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ebonyrei In reply to Starboy16 [2007-06-17 20:54:52 +0000 UTC]

tiz ok glad u enjoyed it

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SilentGlance [2007-06-02 02:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Teh kewlness...I like this

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ebonyrei In reply to SilentGlance [2007-06-02 13:04:34 +0000 UTC]

heh thanks

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Sokkashot [2007-05-30 22:39:38 +0000 UTC]

wow, I loved it^^ My kind of poem!!

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ebonyrei In reply to Sokkashot [2007-05-30 23:14:32 +0000 UTC]

heh heh thanks

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slykid [2007-05-30 19:51:14 +0000 UTC]

coolzes! where you in a bad mood or something? (sorry if I hit a nerve when I said that)

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ebonyrei In reply to slykid [2007-05-30 23:29:56 +0000 UTC]

nah i was just bored, i write a lot of poems like this not sure why...do i hate the world maybe? heh heh who cares thanx though

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slykid In reply to ebonyrei [2007-06-01 05:58:55 +0000 UTC]

welcome lol


THE MOUSE IS IN MY BED!!!!!!
KILL IT KILL IT!!! I'm dead seriosu!! I'm sleeping at my desk tonight!!!

O_O

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ebonyrei In reply to slykid [2007-06-02 00:56:52 +0000 UTC]

ahhh...i have a pet mouse living in a cage in my room....

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jiee [2007-05-30 15:02:07 +0000 UTC]

Cool~~~~ I love it..

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ebonyrei In reply to jiee [2007-05-30 23:32:36 +0000 UTC]

heh heh thank you im glad u liked it

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jiee In reply to ebonyrei [2007-05-31 05:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Np..

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ebonyrei In reply to jiee [2007-05-31 15:08:17 +0000 UTC]

heh heh kewl

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jiee In reply to ebonyrei [2007-06-01 05:39:20 +0000 UTC]

^^

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ebonyrei In reply to jiee [2007-06-02 01:26:42 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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jiee In reply to ebonyrei [2007-06-03 16:08:56 +0000 UTC]

XD

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ebonyrei In reply to jiee [2007-06-03 19:39:39 +0000 UTC]

hee

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jiee In reply to ebonyrei [2007-06-11 14:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. its going longgggg~

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ebonyrei In reply to jiee [2007-06-11 14:25:24 +0000 UTC]

i know ^^

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jiee In reply to ebonyrei [2007-06-11 14:34:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha.. ^^ But your poems are really great..

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ebonyrei In reply to jiee [2007-06-11 14:37:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i have one i want to post but i cant find the original any where its my favorite that i ever wrote

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jiee In reply to ebonyrei [2007-06-11 15:48:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. i cant wait..i hope you find it..

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ebonyrei In reply to jiee [2007-06-11 16:15:47 +0000 UTC]

me too!

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jiee In reply to ebonyrei [2007-06-11 16:34:25 +0000 UTC]

^^

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ebonyrei In reply to jiee [2007-06-12 00:09:38 +0000 UTC]

CHEEZ!

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jiee In reply to ebonyrei [2007-06-12 05:25:33 +0000 UTC]

XDXD

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ebonyrei In reply to jiee [2007-06-12 13:34:12 +0000 UTC]

heh

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neko117 [2007-05-30 01:50:11 +0000 UTC]


That's really cool sounding. Then again if you were in math class while writing this I can understand why your world would be so full of hate. Math is one of my worst subject so that class is very hell-ish.

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ebonyrei In reply to neko117 [2007-05-30 23:34:02 +0000 UTC]

not bad at math just hate the teacher....but no i wrote it cuz i wasn't payin attention to the teacher, he was only talkin 4 like 5 minutes anyway

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