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Published: 2004-01-27 00:37:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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Description A practice in imagery. I wrote about this area of woods near an abandoned castle off my street, I love those woods. Did this for English class, hope you enjoy?
Criticism always welcome.
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interfic [2004-01-31 05:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Arg, I post comments all the time, and 2/3 of them never show up. Crappy ass server.

Anyway, I posted earlier that I thought this story really made me feel the emotions tied to it. The wonder, the suspension of reality, the temporary " fade-away" feeling, the small twitching nerve in the back of your head that says you can't stay here. This can be described with no single word other than beautiful.

I think I had something negative to say about it, but that was in the original post, and I can't remember it now. Erg, server, pft.

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Echoeslegend In reply to interfic [2004-02-02 02:16:01 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, thank you! And I don't mind not hearing the negative. Really.

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interfic In reply to Echoeslegend [2004-02-02 21:56:22 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's not really that, it's that I like to leave something that says "This is how you can do better," therefore giving the writer something more to build on. I couldn't think of anything at the moment. But anyway, that's what I like to get. Otherwise, it doesn't feel truthful, you know? The truth can never be perfect.

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Echoeslegend In reply to interfic [2004-02-02 23:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I know! I like to get criticism, it was just the way you put it. "Negative". No worries.

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skwerrl [2004-01-27 01:15:28 +0000 UTC]

i knew what you were writing about before i finished reading the first line

you guys still need to take me there and show me around next summer

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Echoeslegend In reply to skwerrl [2004-01-27 01:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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