XenaRhapsodos [2016-04-11 17:05:21 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhhhhh I'm squealing so much right, you don't know!! This is amazing, Clare! I wasn't expecting this but thank you so much! ;u; and you nailed it because I've been craving for some Makarov x Reader these past days *hugs* ayyyy you're a godsend, I swear, bb. I thoroughly enjoyed this. So this is the research you were doing? Did I tell you you're an angel? Because you are ;A;
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. You did an amazing work with the setting and Reader's interactions with Makarov are believable. I was holding my breath the whole time because I didn't know what to expect! Makarov scared me, which is something the Reader should feel when faced with someone like him D: I mean, I was so scared of what he would to her and the other kids ;A; oh dear, and that girl with her sister... I was so sad the little girl died. It just isn't fair something like this had to happened to them, being captured to be sold, but it's even sadder to know that it happens in real life too I could feel Reader's despair at her situation, which is terrifying. Makarov's words when he was touching her were so ominous and hurtful... To resign to such a fate, live in a hell with death as the only hope for escape is too much to put into words. I wanted to cry at that point.
And yet the ending was so unexpected! I have to wonder why he just let her go? Perhaps he isn't as heartless as he seems to be? I'm still a bit surprised. I'm not disappointed at all, because it was a twist I didn't see coming, but still it'd be interesting to read your thoughts on the matter I mean, of course I never discarded the possibility of him having a shred of mercy in him, and it certainly was something refreshing to read.
Thank you so much for this, Clare!
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