Marcynuk [2011-02-05 19:19:58 +0000 UTC]
I really like how you brought the description out of the panels and aligned it on the right hand side instead of embedding it at the top of each panel in an italic box (like most comic). The panel where the wolf turns his head is wonderful! Maybe play with the size of the panel boxes, making this one a bit larger to emphasize such a powerful pose.
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