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Published: 2015-06-04 15:46:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 14685; Favourites: 288; Downloads: 0
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Description *sigh.* I have a addiction to new OCs, but I swear this is the last one! (I hope....) but anyways here is one I really wanted, a genie oc! Who has a very special way of granting wishes. Will yours be granted?

Thanks to for making her for me:


So to be clear, Jasmine belongs to and

Now that is out of the way, here is a simple profile on her:

Name: Ember (real name forgotten)

Age: ???? (Over several thousands of years)

DoB: July  ?? ????

Gender: Female

Spiecies Magical being

Weight: ??

Hair color: Crimson Red

Eye color: Purple

Height: 5'5

 

History: Ember was born on a very hot July in a desert oasis city long long ago and was loved greatly by her friends and family. However, as she grew up her body slowly began to break down, unable to endure the yearly heat and evening chill of the harsh desert and was unable to move somewhere more climate controlled. Nearing her death bed, it was revealed to her by a cloaked traveling witch that she could be cured if she went deep into the northern part of the desert and searched for a lamp among a large collection of rocks. Upon doing so she found the lamp and rubbed it finding it dirty, only for a very sexy genie to appear from it. Being weaken and overcome by the heat, the genie was easily able to manipulate Ember into making the correct wishes freeing the genie and getting herself entrapped into the lamp. This had cured her body and even gave her eternal life, but now she was trapped in the lamp till she could do the same thing to get free.

 

Upon becoming a genie, her outfit changed and a special crimson orb with three blue stars appeared over her chest which granted her amazing power. She heard a voice saying that four kinky wishes had to be made and she would be freed.

 

Being nothing more than the size of a speck of dust inside of her lamp, Ember spent hundreds of years alone learning to become a wish granter and how to free herself from her fate. Her long imprisonment robbed her of some of her nice qualities and even her name from enduring solitude for so long. After so long of being alone, someone finally found her lamp and rubbed it and upon appearing in front of a young woman in black, the woman granted Ember her name for not being able to remember her original one and based on her fiery look which Ember was grateful enough that she did not try to trick the woman. From then on, Ember worked hard to try and get herself freed from her fate, though in the end most ask for greedy wishes making it hard for her to obtain her long desired freedom.

 

Appearance: Ember has long crimson red hair which is split into twin long pony tails which wave about on their own as if somewhat alive. She wears navy blue style genie clothing over her slim, well tone body, which her outfit includes a blue veil over her face, a blue revealing top which slims down to a bra top over her chest with a very special red orb in the center of her outfit which its blue stars reflect the current wishes the master has left. She wears darken seen through pants with a golden band on top with blue panties and red curled shoes. Ancient golden jewelry clads her neck and wrists and ankles.

 

When she comes out of the lamp, the area is filled with a blue smoke as she comes twirling out in a dance like motion and always leans forward to show off her cleavage while asking for her new master's wish in a sexy tone and a wink of her eye.

 

Personality: Ember was once a sweet, gentle and shy female but after being tricked into becoming a genie, thousands of years of solitude and being alone and only summoned for perverted and greedy people toughen her up and harden her thinking.

 

As a genie, Ember acts cute and sexy doing whatever it takes to get her masters to make the needed four kinky wishes as on the inside she is a rather deviant woman who thinks cunningly with little compassion. Though if the person is truly in a worse situation than hers, a little bit of her former niceness shows and will help the person out even if it means another thousand years in the lamp.

 

Likes: Dancing, clothes, kinky wishes and hot looking women.

 

Dislikes: Bad wishes, being restrained, those who hit on her and being an immortal genie.

 

Hobbies: Reading books and tricking her masters into kinky wishes.

 

Special talents: Ember is a magical genie endowed with phenomenal cosmic power which is all contained and controlled by the special crimson orb located in the middle of her top which cannot be separated from her. This power flows through her entire body allowing her to be weightless and if outside of her lamp she can move, react and think very quickly. Her hair also waves about as if alive and she can use it to defend herself as her hair can slice steel with a strong whip motion and restrain the mightiest of creatures.

 

 

She can grant any wish but besides a few certain ones and each wish will use up one star on her orb with some wishes taking more stars than others.

 

All three stars: Immortality, anything massive or large in volume.

 

Two stars: A wish that happens far far away from the wishing place or something that would take a while to be granted.

 

Half a star: Any kinky based wish.

 

Can't wish for:

 

More wishes

 

To fall directly in love

 

Bring back the dead

 

Permanent harm or death upon another.

 

To wish anything removed from Ember's body

 

To wish for information she has no knowledge about (like wishing to know her real name)

 

Ember cannot be directly wished free, for her to have her freedom someone must make four wishes for the orb on her chest to break and set her free. To do that, there must be four kinky wishes (sexy clothing, bondage, anything perverted in nature) that would use up half a star. When that is met Ember will be freed while another will take her place. Should the requirements not be met, she vanishes back into her lamp and zooms off to her next waiting place across dimensions and worlds for her next master to appear.

 

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Comments: 31

Medanna [2015-06-04 19:05:48 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I notice you only used one or two shades, and there aren't much highlights or deep shadows, also the folds might need some more definition (unless it's a personal choice). Anyway, the work with the smoke is really interesting, even though I personally feel like the background doesn't really blend with the foreground because of the values, again. The piece itself is really dynamic and the idea is really great, so are the proportions.

I recommend you practice on values and add more colors to your pieces to make them more interesting, otherwise it might look a bit flat. Also, if i could give you an advice, it would be to pick a few colors from the background to add on your characters to blend everything a bit. You could work on backgrounds too, maybe. I recommend you to look for informations about the color theory which may really improve your paintings and add overall harmony (and avoid the kind of disharmony the background and the lamp create).

To conclude, I'd say your drawing skills themselves are really nice, you seem to have your own style, but you might need to work a bit on the impact (or emotions), colors and values and your drawings will get really interesting and less "flat" looking, if you know what I mean. Nevermind, keep drawing and improving, good luck !

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ED3765 In reply to Medanna [2015-06-04 23:18:04 +0000 UTC]

I thank you for the Critique but where you suggest that I work on my drawing skills, I would recommend you work on your reading skills. A few seconds in the artist comments would show I didn't draw this.

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Medanna In reply to ED3765 [2015-06-05 16:42:21 +0000 UTC]

My bad, sorry about that. I actually read it really quick and didn't pay attention. I guess I though you two drew this together or so but nevermind.  

Btw I suggested a work on the values and not the drawing skills themselves.

Thank you and sorry again   

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HappyBottledGenie [2017-04-30 13:46:05 +0000 UTC]

What if I wish to switch places with her so that I can be her genie?

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ED3765 In reply to HappyBottledGenie [2017-05-02 03:37:06 +0000 UTC]

She's a type of genie who curses her master though.

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HappyBottledGenie In reply to ED3765 [2017-05-02 18:01:25 +0000 UTC]

I would gladly accept being "cursed" to her slave

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hon19 [2016-10-24 05:10:08 +0000 UTC]

Hi genie make more of hinata and sakura please

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ED3765 In reply to hon19 [2016-10-25 03:02:28 +0000 UTC]

your wish will be granted.

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hon19 In reply to ED3765 [2016-10-25 04:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Appreciate BRO Thankyou So Much

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KumaraNL [2016-10-06 16:03:17 +0000 UTC]

Check out this story I wrote for you: kumaranl.deviantart.com/art/Ca…

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MexiGojira [2016-08-08 03:14:21 +0000 UTC]

Impressive!

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johnbecaro [2016-07-04 20:05:52 +0000 UTC]

she looks gorgeous and I love her hair as well! 

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CECtheRonin [2015-12-09 00:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Has she appeared in any stories yet?

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goldencrownstarneos [2015-09-16 03:15:29 +0000 UTC]

do you want to role play with Ember?

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David3X [2015-09-09 10:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Cute and mystical

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VertigoR [2015-06-21 00:11:02 +0000 UTC]

Really cute genie... where to find such bottle?

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ED3765 In reply to VertigoR [2015-06-22 03:20:11 +0000 UTC]

something I like to know!

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Dragon-Cana-Love [2015-06-13 11:38:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow she's super cute , and she has a Dragon Ball I see XD

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ED3765 In reply to Dragon-Cana-Love [2015-06-15 03:32:22 +0000 UTC]

magic orb actually.

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Dragon-Cana-Love In reply to ED3765 [2015-06-15 03:36:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha well it has three stars very similar to a Dragon Ball

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kaaslave [2015-06-08 06:30:03 +0000 UTC]

She's cute.

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BondageWarrior2025 [2015-06-07 09:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Hates being restrained, eh? She lives in the worst dimension for that! (Best dimension for us though! XD)

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ED3765 In reply to BondageWarrior2025 [2015-06-08 03:07:51 +0000 UTC]

oh the wishes she will get

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DarkShadowArtworks [2015-06-05 06:09:02 +0000 UTC]

NICE!
Now I know her name

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ED3765 In reply to DarkShadowArtworks [2015-06-06 05:28:29 +0000 UTC]

just came up with it a few days ago

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LinkofHyrule31 [2015-06-04 21:41:24 +0000 UTC]

Will she meet Alex or any of your other OCs? Alex's desire for bondage would make her and her friends the perfect ones to set Ember free. Of course then, one of them (whichever one of them does the wishing) might have to take her place...

If they can find a way to free Ember (with no one being forced to take her place but instead breaking the chain) yet still have Ember keep her powers...she'd be a good ally against Hana and Erza (and their respective lackies)!

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ED3765 In reply to LinkofHyrule31 [2015-06-05 04:01:38 +0000 UTC]

hmm, not sure how to use Ember yet. Sooner or later she will be used in some way.

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Jarkeld [2015-06-04 21:36:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow....I hope we see more of her!

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Whyita [2015-06-04 16:23:47 +0000 UTC]

OMG I remember her! But now that she's your OC I hope to see her more

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ED3765 In reply to Whyita [2015-06-05 04:02:24 +0000 UTC]

I think that's a grantable wish

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Whyita In reply to ED3765 [2015-06-05 04:04:20 +0000 UTC]

But not kinky...in itself

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