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ProtoTEnterprise [2019-06-23 15:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I´m from

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Focusing visually on the drawing, it has a great design of what appears to be a lion with black and violet fur and deer horns, expressively on his face it is attractive to the eye, poee a range of bright colors and luminous tones in the colors of the background that highlight it and contrast it with black fur and that same tonality dress, it also helps the details such as the design of the eyes, the color that has the nose and its skin, the tail that balances it artistically, it seems that I will repeat but the contrast palette is spectacular and the drawing does not feel heavy. That amazes me
In perspective, it is too striking a drawing. But you did a great work elaboration. Keep it up! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1

MarchiMArrow [2019-06-22 12:25:37 +0000 UTC]

Hey Im from ProjectComment   and I have a few comments and tips that I hope would be of use for u in the future.
Firstly, love ur character. He's so kooot. Secondly, the color scheme is nice and it doesn't look flat at all. I really like that. And the hair and tail looks soooo soft. I reallly love the texture u use in the brush. 
My advice to u is the perspective and the angle of the head and body. I mean, the body is fine it's just the head. The perspective for the face needs some adjustment. I suggest that u should draw the other eye smaller and slightly narrow than the other. 
Secondly, ur use of brush is nice and all, it just needs a little smoothing^^. Dont use too much airbrush,or it'll start to look blurry, try to experiment more with ur brush to see which cuites u the most. The lighting and the shadows do need some improvement. But its still a nice try. The highlights are good. I see that u used other colors instead of white. Nice/ I applaud u my friend. Most people use white on highlights. But u did great on that subject ^^

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SmolSoviet [2019-06-22 11:02:41 +0000 UTC]

Heya ^^, Im from project comment, just wanted to drop a critique by, can I say I love the colours, catched my eye first thing as its complimentary and shows a very nice aesthetic, especially with the theme of the artwork being a pride work, it contrasts well with his hair and face which is the main focal point of the picture, thats good ^^, however the hair could use some improving, the gradient on it is great ^^, but it looks flat and has a sudden edge to it, making the hair look hard and not soft, I would also look into the anatomy of the paw, as it does look a little flat and some parts are bigger then others, also while the focal point is very good, I find it hard to rest my eyes exactly on it, a good way to change this would be by contrasting the eye with the shadow cast from the hair, also make sure to put a signature on your work! lol, also this may be a style thing but I would look into the anatomy of the chest and the neck, to make the picture more 3d, over all love this piece ^^, catches the eye well and is very neatly made with the atmosphere, great work ^^

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Anixas [2019-06-22 09:20:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm fom Project comment 

I like how you choose color//////// ,You choose color for character that got an asmosphere from the background that make your work look have a good compatibility I think it's cool!. and someone had comment about that highlight So I don't have to say that again, but In my oppinion black line art that make work a bit stiff feeling my teacher always tell me don't use black color much, Example On the black side of his cheek you may change to another color that brighter and use rimlight instead of contrast above cheek and hair,  but that a little bit problem It's OK for now///////

you have a good sense on color purple and yellow is cool couple color! , I love you artstyle your color and line make your work have a charm atmosphere, Pracetice the way of light more You'll got a lot of work improve.

Sorry If my text make you confused ENG is not my birth language ;-; hope you understand me

I'll wait for your next work.  

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JustALittleAmerican [2019-06-22 05:26:40 +0000 UTC]

I love the line art and colors hear.
And it's really cool to look at.

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Dancin-Angel [2019-06-21 17:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I'm from

Very neat character! The selection of colors is nice (well it is based after the flag colors so..), good style, very "soft" feel with the use of curves than outright straight lines.

My only critique is few. The light on the hair bangs is off, like the light is suddenly cut off by the shade.
   The highlight shouldn't end abruptly like that as it transitions to the dark shade. It would look as if there is something casting a shadow that's causing that to happen. Instead make it fade like how you did with the rest of the hair. If you were wanting a "shiny" look, do a thin line of light against the dark shade?

Only other i can straw is his/her right lower arm. Looks too short in comparison to the upper arm?

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archonedd [2019-06-21 09:43:40 +0000 UTC]

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