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MarchiMArrow [2019-06-22 12:25:37 +0000 UTC]
Hey Im from ProjectComment Β and I have a few comments and tips that I hope would be of use for u in the future.
Firstly, love ur character. He's so kooot. Secondly, the color scheme is nice and it doesn't look flat at all. I really like that. And the hair and tail looks soooo soft. I reallly love the texture u use in the brush.Β
My advice to u is the perspective and the angle of the head and body. I mean, the body is fine it's just the head. The perspective for the face needs some adjustment. I suggest that u should draw the other eye smaller and slightly narrow than the other.Β
Secondly, ur use of brush is nice and all, it just needs a little smoothing^^. Dont use too much airbrush,or it'll start to look blurry, try to experiment more with ur brush to see which cuites u the most. The lighting and the shadows do need some improvement. But its still a nice try. The highlights are good. I see that u used other colors instead of white. Nice/ I applaud u my friend. Most people use white on highlights. But u did great on that subject ^^
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SmolSoviet [2019-06-22 11:02:41 +0000 UTC]
Heya ^^, Im from project comment, just wanted to drop a critique by, can I say I love the colours, catched my eye first thing as its complimentary and shows a very nice aesthetic, especially with the theme of the artwork being a pride work, it contrasts well with his hair and face which is the main focal point of the picture, thats good ^^, however the hair could use some improving, the gradient on it is great ^^, but it looks flat and has a sudden edge to it, making the hair look hard and not soft, I would also look into the anatomy of the paw, as it does look a little flat and some parts are bigger then others, also while the focal point is very good, I find it hard to rest my eyes exactly on it, a good way to change this would be by contrasting the eye with the shadow cast from the hair, also make sure to put a signature on your work! lol, also this may be a style thing but I would look into the anatomy of the chest and the neck, to make the picture more 3d, over all love this piece ^^, catches the eye well and is very neatly made with the atmosphere, great work ^^
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edamame-art In reply to SmolSoviet [2019-06-22 12:37:59 +0000 UTC]
thank you for your advice!!
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Anixas [2019-06-22 09:20:17 +0000 UTC]
I'm fom Project commentΒ
I like how you choose color//////// ,You choose color for character that got an asmosphere from the background that make your work look have a good compatibility I think it's cool!. and someone had comment about that highlight So I don't have to say that again, but In my oppinion black line art that make work a bit stiff feeling my teacher always tell me don't use black color much, Example On the black side of his cheek you may change to another color that brighter and use rimlight instead of contrast above cheek and hair,Β but that a little bit problem It's OK for now///////
you have a good sense on color purple and yellow is cool couple color! , I love you artstyle your color and line make your work have a charm atmosphere, Pracetice the way of light more You'll got a lot of work improve.
Sorry If my text make you confused ENG is not my birth language ;-; hope you understand me
I'll wait for your next work. Β
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edamame-art In reply to Anixas [2019-06-22 12:38:27 +0000 UTC]
thank you!!
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JustALittleAmerican [2019-06-22 05:26:40 +0000 UTC]
I love the line art and colors hear.
And it's really cool to look at.
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edamame-art In reply to Dancin-Angel [2019-06-21 19:39:21 +0000 UTC]
ok ye!! i've been experimenting w/ shading/lighting and will definetly work on that. thank you!!
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archonedd [2019-06-21 09:43:40 +0000 UTC]
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