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unusualworlds [2015-09-07 21:06:15 +0000 UTC]

Hello! So what specifically did you want critique with? I'd need a bit of background info, as in: what were you hoping to achieve, how you worked on this, what was frustrating you or what you're unsure of, etc... just how you feel about it and why you posted for critique. I could give you only technical critique, and there are a couple things to say, but in the grand scheme of things that can only help you a little bit. I think some details like I mentioned would help me to give you more meaningful advice.

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Tudalia-Hex [2015-09-07 14:25:20 +0000 UTC]

What I see here's a lovely fractal / pattern composed of really good lines and dark details. I'm not really very good when it comes to patterns, cauz it takes a lot of courage for me to start a pattern and continue till the end and hats off to u people who do it very well!

The first thing I can easily notice from a close look, that most of the lines in the background aren't very straight... In a pattern most of the things are meant to be symmetrical ...but don't lose hope! With more practice and efforts , one can do wonders!

Keep Practicing!

Another great thing I like about this piece is that it has a variety of patterns as most of the other professionals generally take one sort of pattern and continue to its fullest. Good appeal here!

All over this has been a lovely piece to critique on and with more practice, you can really do good for yourself!

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

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