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Published: 2006-07-31 09:45:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 4124; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 707
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Description READ FROM RIGHT TO LEFT!!
It's a format we need to follow, so for anyone who think we're just some japanese manga wannabe and think the right to left format is stupid, do keep it to youself cos I really don't wanna know.


Anyway, this is fORGOTTEN fREELY, 6 pages of Jeque and Scarlet sequence.
Written by the talented musician and writer, David Franco!! woohoo!
and Art by me

wats this for? I dun think I'm telling cos it's really not confirm yet.
David even made a music for this sequence and it's really touching if you read it with the music,
i'll get his permission to post the music soon. Meanwhile, enjoy the pages and hope u like it as much as I do ^^

fORGOTTEN fREELY characters >> [link]

referencessss used for Mustang.
penciled and inked on papers
tones with photoshop~
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Comments: 34

laurbits [2006-12-10 19:41:14 +0000 UTC]

Great storytelling! The pacing is just right. I really feel for the both of them.

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Grayer [2006-09-01 21:44:45 +0000 UTC]

this ur job?
can post here?

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campsoup1988 [2006-08-25 12:40:03 +0000 UTC]

nice! what year is that mustange? it looks like approx 1969-71 mustange.

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gndagnor [2006-08-16 00:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Ui, i thought this was for sevenseas hahaha XD

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orangetigre [2006-08-09 20:20:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh that is cuuute!!!

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xRachElbaGelx [2006-08-09 16:00:48 +0000 UTC]

^^ Im so glad you're doing David's comic! This is wonderful! ;o;

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tiggerfactory [2006-08-07 02:29:12 +0000 UTC]

aaww~~ its so pretty
And sad of corse, but still, very pretty!
I like the style! It's somthing u see usually!
And I love the angles u took from the car O.o

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noodlesyo [2006-08-02 07:38:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow that was deep... Looking good

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Juny [2006-08-02 01:08:58 +0000 UTC]

I bet there is a serious subject on this, huh?

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JackKeahi [2006-08-01 23:23:34 +0000 UTC]

YES THAT IS AWESOME!!!

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yelmizuno [2006-08-01 21:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Great! Good job ^^

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SorensBlade [2006-08-01 13:34:17 +0000 UTC]

"READ FROM RIGHT TO LEFT!!
It's a format we need to follow, so for anyone who think we're just some japanese manga wannabe and think the right to left format is stupid, do keep it to youself cos I really don't wanna know. "

Thank you! Screw that left to right crap!

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DarkRoseGoddessElena [2006-07-31 20:15:03 +0000 UTC]

This is..Interesting

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strangelittlerebel [2006-07-31 19:39:05 +0000 UTC]

very cool!!!. and the car is mad sexy. great job!!

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Popgrafix [2006-07-31 18:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful storytelling and great stylization

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Bellevue-DarkKnight [2006-07-31 17:01:26 +0000 UTC]

very awesome comic

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kelzero [2006-07-31 16:48:28 +0000 UTC]

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hotarukurama [2006-07-31 16:33:46 +0000 UTC]

wow its soo pretty and the story seems really kewl! u should post more of these !!!!! !

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Rocky-088 [2006-07-31 16:15:36 +0000 UTC]

insteresting

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yuMMiLy [2006-07-31 16:06:07 +0000 UTC]

eeewww... she failed her test~~~

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kalkie [2006-07-31 15:27:27 +0000 UTC]

Man that was so SaAAaaD the girl should have passed so they can all be super happy together and live happily ever after~!
I'm also now applying for transfer, so ye~ah, I'd like things to come out all right

Really awesome mustang drawing, simple but beautiful layout and character designs and good use of tones.

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keikana [2006-07-31 15:10:41 +0000 UTC]

awwwh T3T! this is some of the best-looking comic work I've seen in awhile! O3O

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Byren [2006-07-31 15:09:10 +0000 UTC]

wow, really nicely written and drawn! good job to both of you

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RCatossi [2006-07-31 11:53:16 +0000 UTC]

okay... i did read from left to right... you should have put this note at the top of the first page ¬¬

but i got sensibilized anyway... almost cried!

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RCatossi In reply to RCatossi [2006-07-31 11:56:04 +0000 UTC]

oops, it has a note! duh!

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jjnaas [2006-07-31 11:48:41 +0000 UTC]

Ah! Cool style! I really like the inking.. strong, clear outlines.

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vikifanatic [2006-07-31 11:27:10 +0000 UTC]

It's well done... i feel bad for Scarlet though...

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Julianimator [2006-07-31 11:09:12 +0000 UTC]

hi ed.. nice too se u doing this comic. This is so cool.. Ohya, got one panel a the girl's hair.. not in black colour and I thought there's another person came in. R u done that in purpose?

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BrentBlack [2006-07-31 10:48:56 +0000 UTC]

way nice

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Inkthinker [2006-07-31 10:02:07 +0000 UTC]

Out of curiousity, why do you need to follow the right->left format? You're doing it well, I'm just wondering if it's a personal choice or something that's part of the requirements for submissions or something?

Aside from that oddity, I think it's pretty good. Makes an interesting start to a larger story about either character.

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edwardgan In reply to Inkthinker [2006-07-31 10:10:10 +0000 UTC]

it was kinda part of the requirement for submission~We can't really do anything abt it~ =\
but thanks for the comments~ ^^

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Inkthinker In reply to edwardgan [2006-08-01 04:34:31 +0000 UTC]

If it's out of your hands, so you gotta roll with it.

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xanseviera [2006-07-31 09:52:55 +0000 UTC]

owh~~ what da touching story~~ now I really wanna hear the song...*o* nice rendering and da facial expressions ish da bomb!

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Permanent-Marker [2006-07-31 09:52:27 +0000 UTC]

aww, how sad It's very pretty. It looks like an actual manga. The anatomy and proportions are great

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