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Published: 2007-06-19 17:08:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1452; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 39
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Description I NEED YOUR HELP!! this is the part of the animation that i'm working on. i promised i would not reveal any more scenes but right now i need SUGGESTIONS for the run sequence.

If i go with this scene, then no time will be lose. However, if i have to redo this, then i will, so that it would look good.

So now the question is: "SHOULD I GO WITH THIS SEQUENCE OR THE OTHER SEQUENCE? (see Hinata Test Run)
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Comments: 18

lyneri [2008-11-16 10:46:15 +0000 UTC]

That looks so awesome! How do you do these?

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Fact-N-Fiction [2007-11-12 00:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Well I am quite new to your dA page, and my comment right now is probably late to say but I will say it anyways. I like this one more that the first "Run Test" just because this one seems more realistic to me, I see nothing wrong with this one either, just smoth up the running animation making it more "fluid Looking" and add the detail needed later on and you have it. THOUGH I am not animator and I personally think my work is horrid, so do not take my advise to stongly unless you feel you want too ^__^

I hope I helped and was not an annouyance, being this was pasted back in June and well it is not Nov 11th XD

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Fact-N-Fiction In reply to Fact-N-Fiction [2007-11-12 00:51:21 +0000 UTC]

Er... *Posted... not Pasted XD

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RoxasZ [2007-11-05 03:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Good stuff. good stuff. but I like the other one better I think the first one would look better if you slowed it downed a bit or maybe add one more frame to each leg going up on this animation.

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Czoptimistic [2007-10-26 09:35:07 +0000 UTC]

WOW youΒ΄re quite goooood!

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shiny-15 [2007-07-12 06:32:45 +0000 UTC]

I know this won't be particularly helpful butI think less movement between the frames would help it considerably. Though maybe you already plan to do that when you make the final animation - personally I prefer this one, but it's less ninja-ish.

Looks great!

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MelloRaven39 [2007-06-21 04:50:54 +0000 UTC]

i think this one looks alot more realisic (as in movement ) <3

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ATAngel [2007-06-20 10:25:04 +0000 UTC]

both are good >.< i just cant decide D: can you do them both?
that wasnt helpfull sry

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eekster In reply to ATAngel [2007-06-20 18:31:51 +0000 UTC]

that's a nice one. thought i could make it smoother, so i'll incorporate that idea with yours. thanks a lot! you're an angel!

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ATAngel In reply to eekster [2007-06-20 19:04:15 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^////^

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daughterofashes [2007-06-20 03:00:54 +0000 UTC]

I like this one better personally.

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TheSamuraiElephant [2007-06-19 19:46:13 +0000 UTC]

I like this version better. I hope the vote helps

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Yumi--san [2007-06-19 19:31:39 +0000 UTC]

heres an idea you can make her use kaiten (a big version of it!)

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moninja [2007-06-19 18:29:39 +0000 UTC]

the sequence seems good, could be a little smouther but it's well done

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eekster In reply to moninja [2007-06-19 18:59:50 +0000 UTC]

please cast your vote. thanks!

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kitsuK8 [2007-06-19 17:39:25 +0000 UTC]

o this is really good! you got the movement to flow just right! awesome!

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eekster In reply to kitsuK8 [2007-06-19 18:59:03 +0000 UTC]

so would you prefer this one or the hinata test run? i need the vote of everybody.

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kitsuK8 In reply to eekster [2007-06-19 19:19:00 +0000 UTC]

i like the movement of this one better, but i liked all the added details you put into the first one. i hope this helps out just a lil bit! XD

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