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Destiny-Smasher [2012-07-24 20:42:10 +0000 UTC]

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I really like how this turned out, I love your idea of the reverse kind of style. It reminds me of this picture: [link]
That same theme of both of them feeling doubt and worry, similar imagery. I really like how Sokka and his lyrics are flipped over, and how Toph's green and Sokka is blue. Adding the song lyrics in was also a good idea, too, in general. And you picked perfect lyrics from the song for this scene.

I also think it's interesting how you drew Toph in more of a 'rough' and dirty kind of outfit here, instead of something more clean and 'pretty.' It's very interesting and makes me think about when I will go to write this scene.

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blckjade05 [2012-07-31 09:40:26 +0000 UTC]

I thought that looked like toph. wish i had the energy to critque. its good stuff. these aren't words of encouragement these are facts.

birds fly, fish swim, your really good.

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ArinaOrlova [2012-07-24 23:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I love this art! Very nice. Author you are beautiful.

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141188 [2012-07-24 23:37:23 +0000 UTC]

FAVE

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panda-saxophonist [2012-07-24 23:09:07 +0000 UTC]

what does the text that's upsidedown say? I can't make it out.

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