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eeveelovestory5 — A sad Zutara story

Published: 2012-11-08 21:38:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1801; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 28
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Description She was a lady,
And he was a tramp,
And just like in the story,
He managed to win her heart.
But he took a wrong steep
And he hurt her deep.
The stars,the moon,they have all been blown out,
He left her in the dark
No dawn,No day,she's always in this twilight,
In the shadow of his heart.
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Comments: 12

UnusSicutIgnisEtAqua [2014-12-02 07:40:29 +0000 UTC]

Very deep man 0_• but awsome :3

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sylviajohns [2013-02-15 21:08:35 +0000 UTC]

steep and deep? seriously O__o?

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ShelaSuperhero [2012-11-10 20:57:08 +0000 UTC]

Ummm.... clever idea but the part "The stars,the moon,they have all been blown out,He left her in the dark,No dawn,No day,she's always in this twilight,In the shadow of his heart." is from the song Cosmic love by Florence and the Machines. Clever manipulation though.

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eeveelovestory5 In reply to ShelaSuperhero [2012-11-10 21:34:19 +0000 UTC]

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ShelaSuperhero In reply to eeveelovestory5 [2012-11-11 18:33:51 +0000 UTC]

It's okay, I just know that there is a troll or two out there and they can be cruel. Like I said though really cute.

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eeveelovestory5 In reply to ShelaSuperhero [2012-11-11 18:58:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!!

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ShelaSuperhero In reply to eeveelovestory5 [2012-11-11 19:06:51 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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FullmoonDarkstar [2012-11-10 10:33:58 +0000 UTC]

IIIIIIIITTTTTTT'SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS INCREDIBLE!!!!!! YOU ARE THE BEST POETER I HAVE EVER SEEN!!!!!

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eeveelovestory5 In reply to FullmoonDarkstar [2012-11-10 10:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! It wasn't so hard to made it.

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FullmoonDarkstar In reply to eeveelovestory5 [2012-11-10 10:39:21 +0000 UTC]

It wasn't??? Girl, you have a big talend!!! I'm trying to write poems and songs from 7 years old and they have never been as nice as yours!! I'll be waiting for more!! ~_~

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crystallight1115 [2012-11-10 04:12:09 +0000 UTC]

What song is this?

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eeveelovestory5 In reply to crystallight1115 [2012-11-10 09:09:40 +0000 UTC]

It's not a song.I wrote those myself.

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