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EeveeUtauDesu — .:Death to Your Heart:.
Published: 2011-12-08 00:13:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 655; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 26
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It's Hailey/Xu, Renai's sister again. Doing what she does best. Ripping Renai's heart out.This was the last picture I drew on my sister's laptop, so I put extra effort into it. I'd appreciate a critique so I know how I'd be able to remove my flaws when I return. If I ever do.
Thanks again.~
C'ya guys.
Xu (c) Me.
Picture (c) Me.
And that is not blood. It's heart juice.
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Comments: 6
This is my sixth critique, and I love giving these out to people from some reason. XD
First things first, I like how you drew the picture.
Second, the heart scared me a little bit at first, but I got over it.
Third, Xu is one of my favorite characters that you made. My most favorite is Renai. X3
Last, I like the effects that you put on this drawing. ^^
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Anyways, here is what I rated it and why:
The vision, to people, makes it look really cool.
Originality, is good, because it is well... original. ^^
Technique-- is good, I mean how you drew the whole thing.
Impact-- is good.
derp. I ran out of ideas.
Besides all of the things I said, I like how you drew this.
Keep on drawing,Renai!
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Mai first critique~ e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
As I can see this drawing needs a critique~
Oh boy, here we go~
This is one of your most amazing drawings yet~
The shading is absolutely amazing, although I can't see where does the light source come form, probably from the heart, but that isn't a really important mistake, we all make mistakes C:
Let's go on shall we?
The fur effect really warmed my heart ;w; > w < ~<3 e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
The technique you used for it and it's shading it's amazing!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
I just love the the blood effect also~
The hair - perfect~
Probably you should have put some more shading on her clothes C: But otherwise, THIS IS AMAZING!!e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
Keep up the gewd work owo
and please don't kill me if the critique is bad, it's my first one ;w; and I admit I suck at giving critiquese.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
Dikata~e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
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wow...this is really deep.. you can see the emotion and such and the way it looks, it's just great .w.i think it just looks like it's a realthing, not just a drawing D: and like i already said: i can see emotion,maybe pain ans such, did you drawed this with that emotions? :'x well...all i can say about this is: it's great ^^
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