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Rbrawley [2023-03-20 19:12:57 +0000 UTC]
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VoidedRegalScientist [2019-05-31 23:41:38 +0000 UTC]
I'm feeling apologetic. I'd never run across this one before, it's quite lovely! Not enough Oompa Loompa lewds, in my opinion!
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no-one-here124 [2019-01-22 07:12:51 +0000 UTC]
Still my favorite blueberry story of all time. Yeah the writing is a lot sloppier here than your more recent works but still this story just hits so many of my fantasies just right. Using the '71 movie as the setting, the method of her juicing and it's sexually explicit nature, her transformation being permanent, and her destiny as a blueberry sex toy had all long been my what I had imagined even before you had written this story. The only thing missing from my list was Violet more actively enjoying the sex and her dehumanization and transformation into legally nothing more than a blueberry due to her new DNA warping her mind and desires. But still that seems like a small quibble for how this hit everything else out of the park for me. Other stories you've written have come close but none just hit the checkboxes quite like this one. I've even recently started to look into finding a writer to commission to kind of pick up the torch of this story but it's a struggle to find a writer that does blueberry inflation well and sex well.
It's been a while since you've last posted a story and I do hope the writing bug bites you again soon. But wether it does or not thank you so much for writing this and your other stories. I just wanted to let you know just how amazing I think they are
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efdg In reply to no-one-here124 [2019-01-26 23:00:10 +0000 UTC]
That is the nicest comment I have ever had the pleasure of reading and I love that the story still resonates. It was something that was in my head for years and it was the first story I ever wrote. It just came out so easily I was not making it up I was visualising my ideal fantasy of how that scene played out in my mind. There was so much in this story clawing to get out. It was so raw in my objectification of women, something I like to do less of now. I really like to create an odd heroine here or there now to counterbalance the domination that was present back then. I have tried to write in that spirit since but usually fail- I cant go that dark as a core theme. I have so many half finished Indigo and Violet stories written but my folder is littered with unfinished works so I doubt I will post until they are finished. Never say never I may be back someday. It editing that is the problem. Often I will have 5 different endings and I dont know which one I want to write and nothing flows until I figure it out.
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no-one-here124 In reply to efdg [2019-01-27 05:30:42 +0000 UTC]
Ya in many ways it resonated so strongly for me because it's so close to my own ideal fantasies. I can understand why you've shifted away from the darker aspects even though I still enjoy them. In fiction only of course. And again I personally balance out the darkness by having the girl enjoying, reveling, and loving in her fate by the end.
Writer's block is a bitch and a half but I'm glad you've still have the stories in a folder. Half finished or not! So at least there's still hope someday. If editing is a problem I would gladly help by giving feedback if you thought that would be helpful. I might not be the best person for like grammar and spelling editing but I've served as a sounding board for a few writers and I think I've been helpful to them. If you ever feel like uploading some of your half finished stories to sta.sh and having me look them over I would be ecstatic. But that's just an idea and feel free to ignore it. Another idea you can feel free to ignore is feel free to note me if you'd ever like to talk about any blueberry stuff (not rp) or anything else.
Still I'm most happy that you enjoyed my original comment and I'm glad I could brighten your day. Stay Awesome!
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drocmo [2015-11-06 07:11:11 +0000 UTC]
i loved this it made me wish i was one of the Oompa loompas or at least had her for myself good job
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efdg In reply to drocmo [2015-11-07 23:56:21 +0000 UTC]
Good to see the story is still appreciated after all these years. Thanks for the comment.
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efdg In reply to Helenastories [2014-02-27 13:01:21 +0000 UTC]
First ever story, have changed styles several times since. Check out my folder am sure there is more stuff you would like. Thanks for the comment
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novablueberry [2013-07-20 22:18:46 +0000 UTC]
if only there was a movie or comic to this ... it would be sooo awsome !
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lilwolf07 [2012-11-25 06:51:27 +0000 UTC]
Wow, very intense to read but it's brilliant.
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efdg In reply to lilwolf07 [2012-11-25 23:27:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comment. It was my first story and it had been unwritten but almost fully formed in my head for so long before I wrote it but it still gets views and favs even now.
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efdg [2011-10-29 18:54:44 +0000 UTC]
If you liked this story, read How to Juice a Blueberry Girl in my Deviation folder. You will enjoy it.
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efdg [2011-08-13 01:09:40 +0000 UTC]
Okay. I have updated the Grammar slightly. It is ridiculous how lazy i was when it came to proofing.
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efdg [2011-08-07 21:43:21 +0000 UTC]
whatever does it for you. those guys were always so creepy to me, although i like your interpretation
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stranger122 [2011-08-07 04:00:29 +0000 UTC]
is is odd that for somereason i read the head oompa loompa with a bad german accent?
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no-one-here124 [2010-05-21 23:50:50 +0000 UTC]
fantastic! brilliant! Molto Bene! please please continue. and I'd love to see what they do to veruca to.
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efdg [2010-05-07 09:52:41 +0000 UTC]
possibly. eventually i think i am going to retell the entire story from a different angle, but since i mentioned that veruca had been captured i suppose i should start work on a sequel. thanks for interest shown.
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Julitomarana1017 [2010-05-04 19:27:28 +0000 UTC]
Do you plan on continuing the story?
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BridgeToWhere [2010-04-01 03:24:50 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed it immensely.
It's very much exciting and it's also well done, from a technical standpoint.
So good job.
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efdg [2010-03-21 20:16:01 +0000 UTC]
Not exactly what i intended but am happy enough with it. Submitting new series soon
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Pirakaperson [2010-03-10 21:05:47 +0000 UTC]
Nice job on your first submission! I particularly liked how you modified their song.
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