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Eflatuni — SPRING JOY-2

Published: 2004-04-11 22:32:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 134; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 40
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Description       I love to hope out   
      In the nearest station  
      Where the carnival of newest  
      auditory, visual dimension  
      pure, tremor of pleasure  
      and deep down subtle  
      awakening wild combustion.

      Embark me on a Boomerang  
      Like a child of Universe  
      Let me whizz through your Mind   
      In endless skims and spins...  
                    
      Like a Rainbow merrily arches  
      Wholeness of your Being.
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Comments: 5

purplehayes76 [2004-05-19 19:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Absolute non-sequitor alert...

there was this show TALES FROM THE DARKSIDE in the States (sort of like the TWILIGHT ZONE), and they had this photo effect in the credits, and it looks a bit like what you did to the photo.

It is cool, but it is freaking me out a bit!! Scary (the show was on late-ish at night, and I was a kid when it was on...)

I like the poem too, btw.

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Litheba [2004-04-14 23:33:10 +0000 UTC]

this poem has tasty sounds....would sound fabulous read aloud.

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emo-outfitter [2004-04-13 02:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Tremor of pleasure and Awakening wild combustion..both magnificent descriptions. I also enjoyed the colors in your photo.

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Eflatuni [2004-04-12 12:40:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanky... that was exactly want I wanted to convey in feel and atmosphere... You might imagine the child's reception of nature's feast, and his acknowledments with overcharged restless energy ... to hug the nature and colours with unsupressable urge...

Mind me asking, what's COK refer to? phonetical reading is a bit suggestive, I guess there's meaning to it...

Cheers..!

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rhodeisle [2004-04-12 01:30:00 +0000 UTC]

this is great. i love the way you maniulated the colors. this has a wonderful quality of an abstract painting as well as a timeless effect. reminds me of my childhood as a matter of fact....

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