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affectionateTea [2015-12-31 04:02:33 +0000 UTC]

this is really lovely, the colors are very lifelike and vibrant! you did an amazing job with the eyes, they look round and glossy and very three-dimensional. they're fantastic!

i'm a little bit confused about whether it's supposed to be a doll, or realism? the features are very dollike, so i'm not sure if the eyes are supposed to be that large and close to the edge of her head or if it's a feature of doll proportions and therefore intentional, haha.

there is also a stark contrast between the amount of detail in the eyes and lips, and the amount of detail everywhere else. It doesn't gradually loosen and fade out towards the edge of the canvas, but just sharply drops off around everywhere that isn't her face, and it's particularly noticeable in the flowers, which, given the title, seem to be a focus point. I think it might be stronger if there was more definition in the hair around her face, closest to her eyes, and in her hands and the petals of the flowers, to match her eyes and mouth better. Her dress straps also don't seem to follow the contrours of her body, so they look very odd against her shoulders.

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Cille-Bille [2015-12-29 14:56:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow, she's so pretty! I really love how you did her hair, eyes and lips, its perfectly detailed, and she has so much emotion in her eyes. The colors are very delicate too.

I think there are minor things that could improve. The texture on the flowers look a little flat and has a more sketcy look compared to the rest of the piece, that look very refined. Her hands could improve a little too, they dont look as precise as the details in her face, and her upper lip looks a little uneven.

I really love your piece and i think you did a fantastic job, you are very talented!

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HoshiNoDestiny [2015-12-29 11:23:05 +0000 UTC]

Hello, I'm here for ProjectComment !
I have no words to say how gorgeous this artwork is! It's really stunning in it simplicity! The face is truly beautiful, there are so many little details, such as you did the eyebrows, it really has a great impact on the viewer! You did a wonderful work, bravo!
I have really few tips to improve this work! I think its only true weakness it's the hands, that are a bit shapeless, and their pose is a bit odd, aside for that it's only a matter of opinion! 
I think you should have avoided the thickest brush strokes on the hairline, they kinda break the rhythm and make it look more fake, the thinner strands there looked great and more refined!
Another thing is that you could have made the details on the iris on a softer color, I think they pop out too much! And maybe the pupil darker! 
I think those lips are the prettiest thing ever, I love how you colored it! If the character was supposed to wear lipstick, then it's perfect like it is, if it wasn't I would have kept the brightest pink only on the middle and blur the rest with a softer color!
Keep up with the good work, your art is amazing!

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Lilolilu [2015-12-25 02:00:23 +0000 UTC]

I really love it 

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JuniperJester [2015-12-23 21:06:31 +0000 UTC]

Aww, how cute and pretty! <33 I really like the shading, and the eyes are really nicely drawn as well! QwQ

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TheTigerMaster [2015-12-22 13:30:37 +0000 UTC]

This is a pretty drawing. I love how almost every strand stands out in her hair. I like how her eyes glow and have pretty detailed lighting.

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Ag-Cat [2015-12-21 11:53:21 +0000 UTC]

Lovely artwork. She looks like a doll with her bright eyes, glossy lips and pink-tinted cheeks. I also like her hair style. Not many people draw curly hair since it’s harder to draw than straight hair, and you did a good job with it. The flowers she is holding is a nice touch as well. They make a simple portrait looks much more lively.

There are a few minor things I think could be improve on on the piece. First is her upper eyelashes. Take a look at this eye photo: . The lash is thicker toward the opposite end of the meaty corner of the eye, so you might want to add a couple of strand there for flair. Secondly, her eyes and lips have great definition, but the nose looks blurred compare to them. I think making it looks sharper would make it matches the rest of her face better.

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Envirotech [2015-12-17 07:50:40 +0000 UTC]

Lovely character, the detail on the hair is really cool, looks so simple but I swear I'm looking at a photograph!!! 0_0    Or even a real live person!!   Love the eyes as always and the lips are actually what really drew me into it at first.. The work on the flower petals too is very cool.  Awesome piece of art!!

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Strawberryica [2015-12-17 07:28:11 +0000 UTC]

Simply gorgeous, one of your best pieces by far!<3

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Chiratera [2015-12-17 06:26:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is really really pretty! owo The face is so well made! And the flowers are so cute aahh~

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MarinaDoll [2015-12-17 06:06:43 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, the improvement!! Love all the texture youre doing on the skin, eyes, lips, and hair! 

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ShhKissMeBoy [2015-12-17 04:29:22 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful <3

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