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QueenBlaze101 [2013-11-18 19:43:04 +0000 UTC]
Wow... deeeeep...
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Kanamesama913 [2011-01-09 09:21:38 +0000 UTC]
Waaah.... T^T It makes me want to cry...
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gelun [2010-07-11 14:09:58 +0000 UTC]
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eirol87 In reply to gelun [2010-07-11 15:01:20 +0000 UTC]
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gelun In reply to eirol87 [2010-07-11 16:19:48 +0000 UTC]
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eirol87 In reply to gelun [2010-07-11 19:06:03 +0000 UTC]
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gelun In reply to eirol87 [2010-07-11 19:09:59 +0000 UTC]
good luck in your future endeavours!
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eirol87 In reply to gelun [2010-07-12 02:15:47 +0000 UTC]
i wish you the best of luck, too...in everything that you do!(:
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hawkears [2010-07-07 19:36:06 +0000 UTC]
That's gorgeous. (:
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eirol87 In reply to hawkears [2010-07-08 16:37:13 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much for appreciating it...(:
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SubakuFuyu [2010-07-04 13:42:01 +0000 UTC]
Nice
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eirol87 In reply to Kamveeooch [2010-07-03 20:17:34 +0000 UTC]
thanks again!...indeed,the poem has a very sad tone and theme,cuz it's all about gaara's life before he met naruto...uhm, can i ask why it makes you sad in a happy way?
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eirol87 In reply to Kamveeooch [2010-07-04 08:10:59 +0000 UTC]
ok...may u always have a wonderful day!
yah, i care so much 4 gaara,im so glad you do,too...(:
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Narunar [2010-07-03 19:21:36 +0000 UTC]
wow i love it great job <3
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eirol87 In reply to Narunar [2010-07-03 19:26:19 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much for appreciating it!(: i really love rhymes...
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ninaqueenbee [2010-06-28 05:40:48 +0000 UTC]
AMAZING! I write a lot of poetry, but this has a lot of emotion in it, it tells his entire life, while still having rhymes.
I write plenty of poetry mtself, and this is better than mine!!!
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eirol87 In reply to ninaqueenbee [2010-06-28 16:39:06 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for appreciating it...I love gaara that's why I was able to picture his deep emotion,everything that happened to his life, & eventually, i was able to write this poem...I love rhymes,too...most of my poems got rhymes...i do not consider it better than other's poetry cuz each one of us has a unique style when it comes to writing...i did write some free verse,too...thanks so much again!
don't forget:always believe in yourself!
Gaara rocks!
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