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eirol87 — my poem for Gaara

Published: 2010-06-15 17:44:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 2268; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 83
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Desolate: Progeny of the Wilderness

His clan had waited for his birth
upon the curse of all the sand on earth
the woman who gave him flesh and breath
had cursed the seed, had chosen death
his father tried to steal his life
alone, he faced all odds in life
his existence, he believed was all
to perish weak and slay them all
'cause no one dared to stand and call
in darkness' hands, he had to fall
a monster in the eyes of man
avoided, feared, afar-he ran
the boy from the vast and arid land
sure is he called Gaara of the Sand...


i juz luv Gaara...
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Comments: 28

QueenBlaze101 [2013-11-18 19:43:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow... deeeeep... 

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eirol87 In reply to QueenBlaze101 [2013-11-19 16:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you dear!

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QueenBlaze101 In reply to eirol87 [2013-11-20 21:47:30 +0000 UTC]

No problem! 

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eirol87 In reply to QueenBlaze101 [2013-11-21 17:36:28 +0000 UTC]

oh, have a wonderful day!    

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QueenBlaze101 In reply to eirol87 [2013-11-21 22:05:48 +0000 UTC]

U too!!!

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eirol87 In reply to QueenBlaze101 [2013-11-23 12:44:52 +0000 UTC]

thanks my friend!

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QueenBlaze101 In reply to eirol87 [2013-11-28 00:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Non problem une ami! 

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eirol87 In reply to QueenBlaze101 [2013-12-02 11:02:27 +0000 UTC]

well then, have a very nice day! merci!

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Kanamesama913 [2011-01-09 09:21:38 +0000 UTC]

Waaah.... T^T It makes me want to cry...

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eirol87 In reply to Kanamesama913 [2011-01-09 15:32:47 +0000 UTC]

'hope you like it...

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Kanamesama913 In reply to eirol87 [2011-08-22 22:40:46 +0000 UTC]

I did. It was awesome.

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gelun [2010-07-11 14:09:58 +0000 UTC]

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eirol87 In reply to gelun [2010-07-11 15:01:20 +0000 UTC]

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gelun In reply to eirol87 [2010-07-11 16:19:48 +0000 UTC]

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eirol87 In reply to gelun [2010-07-11 19:06:03 +0000 UTC]

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gelun In reply to eirol87 [2010-07-11 19:09:59 +0000 UTC]

good luck in your future endeavours!

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eirol87 In reply to gelun [2010-07-12 02:15:47 +0000 UTC]

i wish you the best of luck, too...in everything that you do!(:

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hawkears [2010-07-07 19:36:06 +0000 UTC]

That's gorgeous. (:

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eirol87 In reply to hawkears [2010-07-08 16:37:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much for appreciating it...(:

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SubakuFuyu [2010-07-04 13:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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eirol87 In reply to SubakuFuyu [2010-07-04 14:01:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks...

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SubakuFuyu In reply to eirol87 [2010-07-06 14:39:42 +0000 UTC]

^^

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eirol87 In reply to SubakuFuyu [2010-07-06 16:15:46 +0000 UTC]

(:

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Kamveeooch [2010-07-03 19:30:04 +0000 UTC]

That is soooo sweat!!!! It makes me sad in a happy way.. TT^TT

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eirol87 In reply to Kamveeooch [2010-07-03 20:17:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks again!...indeed,the poem has a very sad tone and theme,cuz it's all about gaara's life before he met naruto...uhm, can i ask why it makes you sad in a happy way?

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Kamveeooch In reply to eirol87 [2010-07-03 21:36:26 +0000 UTC]

your welcome~!

It makes me like a little happy to know that someone cares about him!!! (besides me) XD

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eirol87 In reply to Kamveeooch [2010-07-04 08:10:59 +0000 UTC]

ok...may u always have a wonderful day!
yah, i care so much 4 gaara,im so glad you do,too...(:

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Kamveeooch In reply to eirol87 [2010-07-04 15:38:44 +0000 UTC]

oh thanks~! You too~!
Yes he is awesome!!!

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Narunar [2010-07-03 19:21:36 +0000 UTC]

wow i love it great job <3

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eirol87 In reply to Narunar [2010-07-03 19:26:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much for appreciating it!(: i really love rhymes...

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ninaqueenbee [2010-06-28 05:40:48 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING! I write a lot of poetry, but this has a lot of emotion in it, it tells his entire life, while still having rhymes.
I write plenty of poetry mtself, and this is better than mine!!!

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eirol87 In reply to ninaqueenbee [2010-06-28 16:39:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for appreciating it...I love gaara that's why I was able to picture his deep emotion,everything that happened to his life, & eventually, i was able to write this poem...I love rhymes,too...most of my poems got rhymes...i do not consider it better than other's poetry cuz each one of us has a unique style when it comes to writing...i did write some free verse,too...thanks so much again!
don't forget:always believe in yourself!

Gaara rocks!

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