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- my first picture of Tony Stark ever, drawn for my friend Kristýna (she was 16 last month :3) Most probably not the last one. x3

- my first drawing completely done in Photoshop CS5. Yeah, yeah. After almost 2 years of using Paint Tool SAI, I decided to switch to another program again.

Hope you like it! x3

Photoshop CS5, Wacom Intuos4 S tablet
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Tony Stark © Marvel comics
Art © =Eisenrose

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neonoi [2012-07-03 19:01:26 +0000 UTC]

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nebij me D: snad ta kritika nejak pomuze... nejsem expert na umeni a sama mam miliardu nedostatku tak se citim blbe kdyz kritizuju ale to mas za to ze sis requestla kritiky xD

Neumim komponovat texty takze to bude takovy mismas vseho co me napadne a protoze su zla tak zacnu negativama:
Kompozice je strasne nudna. Tonyho poza je velmi strnula a neprirozena (cemuz nepomaha jeho nepritomny vyraz/pohled oci). Co se pozy tyce, uz do tebe ohledne tohohle ryju dlouho, ale uz zase porad ta sama poza, ten stejny uhel ramen, mas ho v temer kazdem obrazku. Lidi ne vzdy stoji telem primo celem k pozorovateli (pokud nejsou egyptane).
Trup vypada jak sud, hlavne prava strana (jeho leva) mi prijde strasne...divna. Stinovani tricka tomu taky nepomaha (v oblasti bricha). Taky rozkrok a nohy mi nesedi, nevim jestli je to velikosti? Mozna delsi trup, delsi rozkrok...? prijde mi takovy zdrcnuty.
Stinovani pazi je moc silne mi pride, pusobi to neprirozene, jako by byl stazeny z kuze - hlavne prave rameno je zvlastni. A na to jak se na celem jeho tele odrazi zar toho ohne tak je zvlastni ze na prilbe, ktera je kovova a tudiz vice schopna odrazeni svetla, je tech odlesku nejmene.
Na hlavu jsem uz narazila, takze znova opakuju ze ma divny, neprirozeny strnuly vyraz, kazde oko se diva jinam (mel se asi divat na tu prilbu ale nevypada to tak), ma takovy "blank" vyraz, je to strasne nezajimave. A prijde mi ze ma vysoke celo.

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at furt nekritizuju jen lol. Hodne se mi libi jaks udelala vlasy, at uz stinovani tak jejich tvar a uces a tak, vypadaji jak zive - dost mozna nejlepsi vlasy cos za posledni rok nakreslila. Nos je taky slusny, prijde mi zes ho udelala vetsi nez obvykle coz je urcite dobre protoze mi pride ze delas prtave nosiky e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> A vousy vypadaji taky skvele, stejne jak ty vlasy. A to cervene osvetleni je taky fajn - mistama to vrze ale celkove to cela hezky dojem a dodava to obrazku hloubku.

Rozhodne se zlepsujes, hold to jde pomalu a postupne ale o tom to je. A rada do budoucna: vazne, vazne zkus i jine pozice ramen nez strnule rovna ramena.
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Eisenrose In reply to neonoi [2012-07-04 07:41:41 +0000 UTC]

(uhhh konecne jsem se taky odlepila od TF abych tu odpovedela XD)

Predevsim veeelke dik za kritiku, jak uz jsem rekla, mam radsi ass kicking, nez ass kissing. Myslim, ze konstruktivni kritiky pises hodne dobre . A ja se snazim se zlepsit a zalezi mi na tom..

"ale to mas za to ze sis requestla kritiky" <- toto me dostalo XD. Jojo requestla jsem si kritiky, protoze tohle byl prvni obrazek ve Photoshopu, tak jsem potrebovala vedet nazory lidi .

Mas s tou strnulosti pravdu D:. Na skeci to vypadalo tisickrat lip a bylo to takove...dynamicke. Mel i jinak ruce, drzel tu masku v klestich a stal skoro bokem, nevim, proc jsem se to rozhodla prekopat. Mozna, protoze nemam rada kresleni postav z profilu? idk. (nebo proto, ze mi tam ve finale nesedely vlastne ty kleste XD).
Na blank vyrazy jsem über master XD. (jeste mam tendence, ze ty postavy vypadaj, jak rika kamaradka, desne "stoned" XD. ja se proste bojim slozitejsich vyrazu)

Obleceni desne prilepeny, to jo :'D. A to jsem ty kalhoty jeste rozsirovala, kdybys videla, jak to vypadalo puvodne :'D. Jak nejaky emo s uuuzkejma dzinama .

To s tim odrazem na prilbe mi nedoslo, abych se priznala. Dobry vedet, priste budu vic premyslet nad materialem (a najdu si na kov lepsi brush)
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Uhhh diky u tech vlasu, ale sly by udelat i lip D:. Delala jsem je na zacatku a to jsem absolutne vubec jeste neumela s brushema. On ma....vice kurdnate. Snad to bude priste lepsi.

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Dizi-ramm-archive [2012-07-03 16:49:46 +0000 UTC]

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WOW! (I'm trying to write a critique :3)

First of all!
WOW!
WHAT A PROGRESS!!!!
Leaving SAI behind and moving to photoshop definitely paid off!!!!

You managed to capture a certain, impulsive, colour scheme!
All together the colouring is just perfect!
I love the red (okay I like red höhöh)
But it fits and creates a wonderful atmosphere to this (I think the red is responsible of it ^^)

Again the dark shadows I love :3
i just keep going on and on about them cos they are nice!
and fit here with the hot atmosphere :3

There is little with the arms I think, but I have trouble to think what, there's something little odd with them...
also the cold blue of the chest thingy (of which name I already forgot) somehow seems little odd.
it's not even close to a mistake but I kind of find it little odd ^^

But it is epic!!!
I AM IMPRESSED!!! x3

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Eisenrose In reply to Dizi-ramm-archive [2012-07-04 07:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah Photoshop had been seducing me with brushes 'n stuff and I couldn't resist .

Photoshop gives me more freedom. With SAI, I tend to make everything perfectly smooth and unnatural. Also, my SAI drawings are fucking tiny. (so they don't take even more time with all that smoothing and so on XD). Tony pic is fucking huge so I can print it on A3 paper (for Kristýna's birthday....isn't it cool when you don't have to buy anything but just draw something nice you would enjoy doing anyways? )

Uhhh I just enjoy fucking the shit up with colors. And this was more or less an attempt of something a little different again. I'm not sure if it's bright enough but those red thingys are sparks from a furnace or something

Yeah, the arms D:. I have been working on them most of the time to be honest and I realize they suck, but I just wanted to get it done at last D:. Fuck shoulders, abs, arms and other nice things on men we love but can't draw XD.

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Dizi-ramm-archive In reply to Eisenrose [2012-07-10 12:15:17 +0000 UTC]

OH YES!
you get the brush stroky thingys better with photoshop and it's more expressive! :3

OH MY GOD IT'LL LOOK EPIC AS A3!!!! O.O


I love your colour using and I love to use colours too x3
all the furnace lights and colours on bg and tony and mask look EPIC!!!!

fuck anatomy xD

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Eisenrose In reply to Dizi-ramm-archive [2012-07-11 09:32:15 +0000 UTC]

Well the shading on mask is actually fail tho it should reflect the light more than the rest of the objects XD (since it's made of metal)

Thank you huuun x3

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Dizi-ramm-archive In reply to Eisenrose [2012-07-11 12:40:33 +0000 UTC]

I didn't even notice that so it doesn't suck :3

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GalacticDuckTurtle [2012-09-15 18:32:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh my.. this reminds me of Hamlet! I like the colours too

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Eisenrose In reply to GalacticDuckTurtle [2012-09-23 18:12:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ChibiBishoujo [2012-07-13 00:32:11 +0000 UTC]

scary good!

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Eisenrose In reply to ChibiBishoujo [2012-07-13 19:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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ChibiBishoujo In reply to Eisenrose [2012-10-10 01:22:11 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome!

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Lady-Compassion [2012-07-03 22:41:29 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic....in the truest sense of the word!

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Eisenrose In reply to Lady-Compassion [2012-07-04 06:59:07 +0000 UTC]

oh stop it you
Thanks ♥

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RAIS1 [2012-07-03 22:10:45 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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Eisenrose In reply to RAIS1 [2012-07-04 06:58:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!

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RAIS1 In reply to Eisenrose [2012-07-04 07:45:06 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome

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CapitainSlow [2012-07-03 19:03:46 +0000 UTC]

errmm...is it okay if a person, who doesn't know anything about art and about all connected with art, leaves her comment here?
he looks like Tony, yay!!!
and it's a cute picture
and I like it
and I guess it's the most imbecile comment here

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Eisenrose In reply to CapitainSlow [2012-07-04 06:58:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you x3 <3

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Werika [2012-07-03 16:40:54 +0000 UTC]

ASDFGHJKLASKDAFGHHHHH
víš moc dobře, jak se cítím

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Eisenrose In reply to Werika [2012-07-03 16:43:10 +0000 UTC]

*dat gif*

Totálněmaximálněkompletněabosutně zamilovaná?

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Werika In reply to Eisenrose [2012-07-03 16:56:45 +0000 UTC]

tak nějak *_* to la budu používat!

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Eisenrose In reply to Werika [2012-07-03 17:02:31 +0000 UTC]

everything's Tony and nothing hurts

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