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bunnystick [2020-03-29 04:01:06 +0000 UTC]
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elavoria In reply to AxxKat [2020-01-21 01:47:24 +0000 UTC]
Ahh thank you so much! <333 And for the fav, too! ^__^
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Melian-Alcarime [2020-01-20 19:30:00 +0000 UTC]
It's so nice to see you dolling again! Great job on the base edit, btw. Though I think that flowing white hair has to be the best; it has great form/depth.
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SBS-Axari [2020-01-17 23:34:59 +0000 UTC]
The hair is indeed wonderful I also like the way the fabric of her cape (?) fades from blue to yellow, and the magic effect is cool.
I'm a bit unsure about what that's supposed to be coming out underneath that cape, though. Is it her stomach? I'd suggest simply removing it, having everything below the yellow edge of her cape be that dark blue with the transparent light blue fabric. Or else make it be almost as wide as the width between her arms, and make it go down to the edge of the picture. You would also have to re-shade it I think.
One thing that could be cool would be to have his left arm and hand (the one which isn't visible now) come across her stomach, sort of holding her close. If that would fit with the character?
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elavoria In reply to SBS-Axari [2020-01-17 23:54:31 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And for the fav as well. ^__^ Yes, it's a sheer cape with a little capelet on top of it.
Haha yes, that is indeed her stomach. The base had cartoonish proportions and I decided to roll with it, but it would definitely make more sense to widen and lengthen it - cutting her torso off exactly where the base ends doesn't /quite/ work when there's fabric trailing behind her, but alas I am lazy! It probably wouldn't be too hard to adjust, though, so I think I'll have another go at it later.
That would be both cool and in-character, but then I would have to draw it myself. ; p That's more than just laziness though - I've never gotten the hang of making my own bases as my figure drawing is lacking [but something I'm hoping to improve this year], so I think that's best left alone haha.
I appreciate your long comment. <3
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elavoria In reply to SBS-Axari [2020-01-18 04:33:09 +0000 UTC]
All right, I fixed it~ I like this better, so thank you for bringing it up. :3 My partner when he saw it pre-fix also commented on how ridiculously tiny her waist was, so between the two of you I had to do something about it. XD I also made her clothes more obviously white while I was at it.
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elavoria In reply to SBS-Axari [2020-01-18 18:29:04 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Glad you think so. :3
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