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ascoli00 [2022-01-07 03:07:08 +0000 UTC]
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femelushka [2015-06-03 23:38:02 +0000 UTC]
artistik
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artroland [2009-10-15 18:11:04 +0000 UTC]
Your sense of composition and drama are definitely in there, but those mats for the walls are horrific. I think with better building models to position your model around, you'd have much better work, and certainly stronger. All in all, what you had control over in this image, you did very, very well. Keep going with this, with better background models. I think you have something here!
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ElBorja In reply to artroland [2009-10-18 17:30:15 +0000 UTC]
I too think I rushed this piece a bit... I should hav replaced the wall textures... I will remember it.
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AshSweetlady [2009-10-15 02:51:00 +0000 UTC]
I like this alot, how did you blur the background? It adds so much to the feeling of space in the scene. I wanna learn!
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AshSweetlady In reply to ElBorja [2009-11-05 08:05:55 +0000 UTC]
Hmm I don't have photoshop - is the lasso and gaussian blur you talked about a photoshop thing? *sigh* I'm sorry but I have a hard time following tutorials because I need to visualize things or do them to learn them - so unless a tutorial has a lot of specific pics I get lost easy and I'm so new to this stuff I feel like I need a class!
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ElBorja In reply to AshSweetlady [2009-11-05 08:22:00 +0000 UTC]
Well,
The gaussian blur exists in any applisation... Gimp also has a gaussian blur (I do not know how it is called, you should do a little search on the net)
The lasso tool is the freehand selection tool. In short, you use the selection tool to select the parts of your image that are far (in my case the background and the end of the tunnel) and then you blur only that part of the picture.
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AshSweetlady In reply to ElBorja [2009-11-06 10:36:45 +0000 UTC]
You don't know how much that helps, ty!
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Ascavilya [2009-10-13 22:53:44 +0000 UTC]
I really like the feel you have gotten with this mate, it's come up really well. The only thing that detracts from it (for me) is her right hand doesn't seem to be holding the sword properly.
I like what you've done with the DOF by blurring the background through the tunnel too.
Top work.
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ElBorja In reply to Ascavilya [2009-10-14 07:51:16 +0000 UTC]
Now that you mention it, it is true it looks weird... well, I will be careful next time.
Thanks for the feedback!
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Ascavilya In reply to ElBorja [2009-10-14 09:01:52 +0000 UTC]
No probs at all mate.
That sort of thing tends to be my Achilles heel as I'll see something like that in one of my pieces and spend ages getting it to look right - usually means I miss something else until I finish it and then have to go back and fix that too. lol
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Raindropthelf [2009-10-13 17:25:45 +0000 UTC]
I think you done a fantastic job on this Render.
LOVE the scenery and her outfit.
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teturo [2009-10-13 14:14:54 +0000 UTC]
It looks like it turned out well to me ^_^
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teturo In reply to ElBorja [2009-10-13 16:58:06 +0000 UTC]
Not really ^_~ The picture is quite nice.
You are welcome.
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ElBorja In reply to Acidbl00d [2009-10-13 16:55:32 +0000 UTC]
Hombre, pues gracias!
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monkeynohito [2009-10-13 11:38:28 +0000 UTC]
Ooo, it looks very good, I like the layout.
This sort of scene doesn't need much in the way of decor though, you may want to try an interior shot if you want to practice.
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ElBorja In reply to monkeynohito [2009-10-13 16:57:04 +0000 UTC]
Interior shot... noted. I will start working on it.
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Ean-Sze [2009-10-13 08:04:14 +0000 UTC]
very nice !!
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Ean-Sze In reply to ElBorja [2009-10-13 22:05:43 +0000 UTC]
welcome !!
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