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Electric-Bluejay — Training in the Dojo

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Published: 2015-05-13 14:50:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1587; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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I FINISHED IT, GUYS. I FINISHED IT. 

There's some minor details I'm not happy with (Cole's right leg and hand, and Lloyd's left arm), but all in all, I'm okay with it. 
I like how I did on the shading of Cole's outfit... Especially since I'm pretty bad at coloring/shading. 

SPARRING GONE WRONG. COLE, YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO MAKE CONTACT. DUDE. 

Lloyd stole Cole's cake. Bad idea. 

Critiques are much-appreciated! Don't hesitate to criticize!


Reference from Mastering Manga with Mark Crilley, which is an AMAZING book that taught me how to draw how I do now. If you want to learn manga, definitely consider this book!
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Comments: 34

BlazeraptorGirl [2015-05-14 02:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


This piece has a lot of emotion, you can tell both are shocked, which tells the story about it being an accident! This contributes to Vision.
I give it a lot of Originality because the scene is not in the show, and even though this kick pose is probably used in many places, the "accident" nature of it has probably never been done anywhere else!
Technique was taken off from for the proportions you mentioned struggling with, (also Lloyd's left hand needs to be bigger, it's closer than the other one) but more for the fact that Lloyd looks like less work was put into shading. (black somehow is easier to shade and so looks better with the same amount of effort. Maybe that's why I used to never bother putting my work in color. Lloyd's gi is probably green because of envy!)
High Impact because you can feel them moving, even without motion lines. But even more so for the emotion I mentioned above.
TACOS!

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to BlazeraptorGirl [2015-05-14 03:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique!
TACOS XD

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BlazeraptorGirl In reply to Electric-Bluejay [2015-05-14 03:56:49 +0000 UTC]

BECAUSE LOGIC!
and possibly boredom with life 

...obviously tacos are the best solution for that 

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to BlazeraptorGirl [2015-05-14 15:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Obviously XD

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jewelninjago [2015-10-03 16:26:59 +0000 UTC]

Poor Lloyd you should've titled it at the cake restaurant !!

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Ninjagofan1Cole [2015-06-01 21:47:05 +0000 UTC]

XDXDXD

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AidenCiques [2015-05-17 11:51:55 +0000 UTC]

Muahahaha! I'm working on one where Jay uppercuts Lloyd because…because…because he's annoying!

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to AidenCiques [2015-06-01 21:35:56 +0000 UTC]

YESSS, SOMEONE WHO AGREES!!

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KairiVenomus [2015-05-17 01:58:02 +0000 UTC]

You drew this?! u OH MY GOOLASH!!!! You did so well!!!!

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to KairiVenomus [2015-06-01 21:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! :'D

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SuperPuffyGamer [2015-05-14 08:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Soo cool! Great job!

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to SuperPuffyGamer [2015-06-01 21:36:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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KiaLover [2015-05-14 00:07:50 +0000 UTC]

I know you cherish this moment in time XD Awesome job

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to KiaLover [2015-06-01 21:36:20 +0000 UTC]

Yes I do XD Thanks

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Electric-Empire [2015-05-13 22:21:46 +0000 UTC]

See what happens when you steal Cole's cake, Lloyd? Did you even think it through? xD

This looks fantabulous btw!

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to Electric-Empire [2015-06-01 21:36:36 +0000 UTC]

Lloyd doesn't think in general XD

Thanks~!

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PinkiePie-Ninjago [2015-05-13 22:14:59 +0000 UTC]

COOL!!!!
Great drawing

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to PinkiePie-Ninjago [2015-06-01 21:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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BlazeraptorGirl [2015-05-13 19:42:26 +0000 UTC]

Humans are the most difficult thing EVER to draw realistically! This is amazing!

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to BlazeraptorGirl [2015-06-01 21:36:48 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thanks!

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ArwynRie [2015-05-13 18:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Love the subject!  Proportions, as you said, are a bit off, but the shading and all else are great!  (Love Cole!)

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to ArwynRie [2015-06-01 21:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks c:

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Allicat141414 [2015-05-13 18:06:32 +0000 UTC]

NOOOO LLOYD!!!!  

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to Allicat141414 [2015-05-13 18:22:59 +0000 UTC]

XD MWAHAHAHAHAHAAAA

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Allicat141414 In reply to Electric-Bluejay [2015-05-17 16:42:19 +0000 UTC]

  I WILL MURDLEURDLE      YOU!!!

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ElvenPrincessMiayln [2015-05-13 15:42:09 +0000 UTC]

Lloyd: Ow! We're just sparring! Not so hard!
Cole: You think an enemy is gonna take it easy on you?

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to ElvenPrincessMiayln [2015-06-01 21:37:04 +0000 UTC]

XDD

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XXNinjaofDarknessX17 [2015-05-13 15:15:46 +0000 UTC]

That is SO awesome!!!

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to XXNinjaofDarknessX17 [2015-06-01 21:37:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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XXNinjaofDarknessX17 In reply to Electric-Bluejay [2015-06-01 21:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Yw!

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snowyroxx22 [2015-05-13 15:14:00 +0000 UTC]

Nice!!!!      

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to snowyroxx22 [2015-06-01 21:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you c:

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JeimsVinter [2015-05-13 14:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I can not draw so realistic ... It turned out very very best, just ... Loyd not too curly?

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Electric-Bluejay In reply to JeimsVinter [2015-06-01 21:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
Hmm?

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