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Eledora — PDL R5: Cause and Effect - Part 2
Published: 2014-03-09 18:23:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 757; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 20
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(Have to divide the file into two parts this time because dA was being tsun and didn't allow me to submit it in one piece ;3; Sorry for the inconvenience!)Part 1 | Part 2
And if you missed a page, you can always click the left arrows key to go back ^u^
Round 5 entry for PKMN-DreamLabs !
My PDL entries are closely related to what happened in the last rounds, so I strongly suggest you to at least check out the first, last parts of my round 3 and my round 4 to get a general idea of what's going on!
You can check back other parts of the previous story starting from here too. There are lab reports written by that red headed lab staff you see up there in the flash comic ;3
Featuring (list according to first appearance): Konn | Kiro | Mikan
Huge thanks for Ryotsu-san , XieRH , Warped-Dragonfly , VanillaAcolytes and Southrobin 's help on grammar checking! This would have been full of errors like this artist comment I'm currently writing without their help ;w; Also thanks for everyone who was interested in helping as well >w<
Was going to title this round "Karma", but it's a bit too cliche for me |Dc But yeah the main focus on this round for me is foreshadowing! As you may have already noticed, things would have ended up being sooooo muuuuuch better if Konn hasn't been making all the wrong decisions and offending everyone all the time >w>\
So...the lost Dragonair case is near its closure! I hope you all got enough hints to figure out who was the real culprit, cause I doubt if it's still possible for Konn to work on it now /owo;\
In case if you are wondering, most of the poppy flowers in the last few panels aren't even poppy flowers. Gotta find a way out of the Mature filter okay
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Indeed owo;\
Make sure to check out Round 6 to find if there's a funeral waiting for him or not //wait
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didnt expect that at all dskfsdjfdsf
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KJSDLFLSADF I knew it was worth waiting for part 1 to be fixed before reading all this!!!
Oh man Ele you did an awesome job! It got me to the edge of my seat reading this! 
not to mention your flash animation/comic is marvelous!
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Ahh thank you so much for waiting! It got me a bit worried if everyone would have got impatient and couldn't bother anymore >w>\
I guess that's one of the troubles you'd get into when it comes to Flash, but making things move is like my best selling point, so I gotta comply |Dc
And yeah looks like Konn finally has to pay off some consequences for his wrongdoings! Too bad he's dragging everyone else into a terrible mood as well. That's now how you treat your son man -n- Kiro should probably go slap his dad's face when he gets out of the Dream World first \=w=
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Aaah this looks great ele!! i loved the animation and art for the story! i also am pretty clueless on who could have taken pascal...
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Ahh thank you very much! <3 I'm happy enough to know that the story isn't being too draggy haha x3
Also no worries, we will eventually figure that out owo/
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It was very well done, and now I'm heart broken. And have no idea of who kidnapped Pascal. Cograts, it was an amazing round
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Ahhh thank you! It makes me happy enough to know that someone once thought about if it's possible to find out who kidnapped Pascal already huhu >w<\
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You're welcome. Also, after reading your round I took a look at a few flash comics tutorials and saw that you commented on yuumei's flash tutorial, and she edited the tutorial because of that. It's kinda funny to realize the world (or the internet) is so small. I'm thinking about giving it a try
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Huehue that's probably is also because Yuumei is like, super popular x3
Yeah the internet world needs more Flash comics /owo/ One of us one of us
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Hehe, yeah. It's still amusing, though. Anyway. that was all I had to say. Hope you make it to next round
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Thank you! >w<\ Good luck with your Distortion round as well *w*
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seconded, that was an amazing flash ! *A* I loved the transition effects you used and the colour palettes in the different scenes as well! amg the end
(and both part 1 and part 2 worked for me ;v;/ I hope they're working for other people!)
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Ahh thanks much for the comment! Glad to know that the transition effects looked nice and isn't too draggy, that was a bit last minuted >w<\ And yes the end was my favourite part to draw too <33
Good to know that it worked too, phew |3
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ahh btw did you managed to read part 1 as well? A few people were saying that dA wasn't loading it for them...
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Yeah. It worked for me. O: Maybe it was their browser? I use Google Chrome, if that helps.
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Yeah same! owo/ Thanks for the confirmation!
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