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Published: 2010-02-22 00:20:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 405; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description Sakura stood a few feet away from the bathroom door, waiting for Sasuke to emerge, clenching and unclenching her fists.

The door finally opened fully and Sasuke stepped out, pausing when he saw her standing there, face blank. He raised a questioning (and perfectly arched) brow.

Sakura looked up at him, eyes wide and innocent looking.

"How do you feel?" she asked.

"... Fine."

"Everything is healed?" she asked, taking a step closer.

"Aa," Sasuke said, swallowing.

"No more fever?" another step closer.

"..."

Sakura now stood about half a foot away from Sasuke, closer than he had ever let anyone stand.

"So you feel better now right? Because I healed you?" Sakura asked, her voice low and husky.

"Aa," Sasuke began to wonder just where this conversation was headed.

"So, tell me something, when you came into my room yesterday," she began, licking her lips, her hand toying with the collar of his shirt," all... bloody and broken... did you just... expect me to heal you? Is that why you came?"

Sasuke didn't answer, Sakura looked up and him with a smirk that would have made him proud, hand glowing with chakra.

"Jackass."

Sakura delivered a fierce punch to his jaw, hearing bone crack. Sasuke flew back into the wall behind him, he could feel his broken jaw already beginning to swell. He looked up at Sakura, who was still standing. She gave him a sweet smile before walking into the bathroom and locking the door.

Sakura looked at her reflection in the mirror, still smirking.

Take that asshole. Don't think that you can just come and barge back into my life.

She turned on the shower and, very satisfied with herself, began to wash her hair.

Outside, a now livid Sasuke pressed a cold cloth to his jaw, waiting for the stupid, annoying pink haired girl to come out of the shower.
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Comments: 29

hermoniegrangerlover [2010-05-25 23:36:00 +0000 UTC]

is there another 1????????????

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to hermoniegrangerlover [2010-05-25 23:53:20 +0000 UTC]

lolll
well i havent been getting alot of readers or comments on this story so i havent bothered updating
(tell people about it! xD)

im pretty sure i already have the next chapter typed up tho

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hermoniegrangerlover In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-05-26 03:07:10 +0000 UTC]

k thanks then, so ill tell peeps 4 ya!

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to hermoniegrangerlover [2010-05-26 20:38:32 +0000 UTC]

yay please do!
<3

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uchihayumi13 [2010-05-11 19:22:23 +0000 UTC]

I understand your anger Sakura, but did you really have to break his jaw? Couldn't you just glove smack him?

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to uchihayumi13 [2010-05-11 20:30:31 +0000 UTC]

PSHT
4+ years of trying to get him back and having him trying to kill you in the process doesnt DESERVE a glove smack :<

he NEEDED that punch to knock some sense into him
that punch means: I'm not the little girl you left behind and i will FUCK YOU UP if you try to mess with me >

lol

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uchihayumi13 In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-05-11 20:50:49 +0000 UTC]

Lol true

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Silverbloods [2010-02-22 22:44:27 +0000 UTC]

Please write more xD

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to Silverbloods [2010-02-22 22:46:38 +0000 UTC]

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Silverbloods In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-02-22 22:48:50 +0000 UTC]

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to Silverbloods [2010-02-22 22:53:27 +0000 UTC]

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Silverbloods In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-02-22 22:59:57 +0000 UTC]

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XmyteddybearX [2010-02-22 03:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Writ.... wait I can't say "write more" haha just kidding I liked the part were Sakura punched Sasuke. Your stories are truly amazing C: I hope to read more of you work

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to XmyteddybearX [2010-02-22 04:29:28 +0000 UTC]

LOL I would punch him too!
You can't just waltz back into someones life and expect them to act normal!

And I plan on finishing this fic soon, so watch for more updates!

And thank you!

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XmyteddybearX In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-02-22 20:46:13 +0000 UTC]

XP your suffocating me with your hug *panting* Lol

No problem my pleasure

Aww it's about to end T . T but life goes on

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to XmyteddybearX [2010-02-22 22:29:13 +0000 UTC]

lol yes it does ^-^

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XmyteddybearX In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-02-22 23:45:36 +0000 UTC]

> <

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emmiwish [2010-02-22 00:25:08 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME 8DDDDDDD
He should totally bend his pride and apologize. ^^

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to emmiwish [2010-02-22 00:26:45 +0000 UTC]

PSSSHTT
dont you know the rules of the uchiha?

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emmiwish In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-02-22 00:27:23 +0000 UTC]

I do, but HE SHOULD ANYWAYS. 8D

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to emmiwish [2010-02-22 00:33:53 +0000 UTC]

LMFAO

UCHIHA'S DON'T APOLOGIZE!! xD

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emmiwish In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-02-22 00:36:02 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW I KNOW
BUT HE SHOULD ANYWAYS!!!!

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to emmiwish [2010-02-22 00:39:31 +0000 UTC]

but he won't
it goes against the code xD

he wont apologize cuz he's too sexy for apologies xD
speaking of sexy...do i sense some foreshadowing!?

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emmiwish In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-02-22 00:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Aaw. D:
*deflate

YAAAAAY FORESHADOWING 8D

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to emmiwish [2010-02-22 00:51:58 +0000 UTC]

xD
what did you sense?
there was actually a hint in this chapter
lets see if you noticed

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emmiwish In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-02-22 00:57:13 +0000 UTC]

IS IT THIS: "So, tell me something, when you came into my room yesterday," she began, licking her lips, her hand toying with the collar of his shirt," all... bloody and broken... did you just... expect me to heal you? Is that why you came?"

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to emmiwish [2010-02-22 02:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Teehee xD
Maaaaaybe

There's another one, but it was like... Not as obvious
You know the phrase "if a boy makes fun of you it's because he likes you" ?

I'll let you think about that and see if you can get it
c:

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emmiwish In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-02-22 02:46:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I do~

Ohohohohoho!!! DD
*cant wait for moar

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emmiwish In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2010-02-22 00:56:41 +0000 UTC]

REALLY!?!??!?!
*goes to reread over and over again

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