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elegant-lolitaxx — A Cold and Broken Hallelujah14

Published: 2009-10-17 21:37:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 419; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description The clock on the wall read 1:17 in the morning. Sakura lay in her bed fast asleep. All of her clothes were neatly folded and sat on top of the dresser ready to be put back into her backpack in the morning when she left. The room was impeccably clean, almost as if no one was staying in it in the first place.

While it may have looked peaceful, the young pinkette's sleep was troubled, thought you couldn't really tell. She did not toss or turn, but there was a crease between her eyebrows that signalled some kind of distress. Her covers were pulled up to her chin and she lay on her side.

The room was utterly silent; the only sound was the ticking clock on the wall.

Suddenly, the sliding door slid open and a dark figure was kneeling on the ground half in and half out of the room. The sound woke Sakura, but she did not move. Only her eyes opened. She did not want the intruder to know she was awake.

Judging by the amount of noise made, she assumed it was some kind of petty thief.

The sliding door closed and she heard the intruder panting, like he was out of breath. Her eyebrows furrowed in confusion, why had he not attacked her yet?

Very slowly, she turned onto her side to get a view of the intruder. He was hunched over on his knees, coughing up blood.

The medic in Sakura told her to go over and help; she removed the covers and grabbed a kunai from under her pillow just in case.

As her feet touched the ground, the intruder coughed once more before his knees gave out and he lay in a heap on the floor. It was then that Sakura recognized the
face.

"Oh my God, Sasuke!"
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Comments: 14

emmiwish [2010-02-03 01:36:59 +0000 UTC]

THE SUSPENSEEEEEEe
good thing theres more :]

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
*hyperventilates

I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS

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Silverbloods [2009-10-19 13:59:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm about to rip out my hair and scream profanities at this computer in the library. LMAO.

Fer cereal.

Oh so where was I?
Oh yeah...fjdsoifjsdofiu4fsdkjfdslkfj!
WOMAN!

WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME SO?!
WHY MUST YOU STOP IT..HERE!?!

I..I..

Grrr.. >:

/sob;;

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to Silverbloods [2009-10-19 14:16:13 +0000 UTC]

lmfao

for CEREAL?
teehee

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Silverbloods In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2009-10-19 19:53:44 +0000 UTC]

YES, CEREAL.
I just had some Frosted Flakes ;DD
They're grrreeaaattt! xDD

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to Silverbloods [2009-10-19 20:36:56 +0000 UTC]

lmfao

HOLY CRAP
has NO ONE figured out the pattern?
i ALWAYS end with a cliffhanger!
GOSH

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Silverbloods In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2009-10-19 20:43:48 +0000 UTC]

-raises hand- Ahem.
I HAVE.
I DO THE SAME THING! ;DD

Jeeebuuusss >.>;;
LMAO.

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to Silverbloods [2009-10-19 23:51:11 +0000 UTC]

LMFAOO

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XmyteddybearX [2009-10-18 19:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Lol Love this story! I love the "OH my God Sasuke" part

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to XmyteddybearX [2009-10-18 21:39:49 +0000 UTC]

xD
im so full of ideas!
ive been on a pilgrimage walk with my school all day
(im so tiiiirredd ToT)

but yeah, im gonna get to work!
:3

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XmyteddybearX In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2009-10-18 21:44:58 +0000 UTC]

lol,I hope you recover from (tiredness) YEss more story. I have to type Our Sanctuary Chapter 2 and 3 for I can upload it. But they erased all my stories and all my anime picture to get my computer free from viruses. But thank god I saved it on my flash-drive (thanks to the person that created a flash-drive)

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to XmyteddybearX [2009-10-18 23:13:02 +0000 UTC]

lmfaooo
AMEN to that!
teehee
well, im off to write!
*focuses*
O.O

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XmyteddybearX In reply to elegant-lolitaxx [2009-10-19 02:08:12 +0000 UTC]

lolxz
I hope that you are able to write alot lolxzs

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xxkissenvyxx [2009-10-18 00:23:39 +0000 UTC]

okay Im gonna have to kil you very soon.
YOU JUST HAAAAAD TO END IT THERE!!
your hurting sasuke?
tsk tsk shame on you

although i do like it.
update pleeeeease!!!!!

ily<3

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elegant-lolitaxx In reply to xxkissenvyxx [2009-10-18 02:25:23 +0000 UTC]

lmfaoooooo
well, its called suspense woman!
and i am on a freakin ROLL this weekend okay?
ill probably update again tomorrow (NO PROMISES)

lol
and OBVIOUSLY hes hurt!!
he just fought OROCHIMARU

GOSH
pay attention!!

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