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ElementalSpirits — Beginnings - pg14
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Page 15: [link]
Ah, the dillema of trying to show a passage of time with such a limited page count...
I like how this page came out though. ^^
Story & characters © Me, ElementalSpirits
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Hahaha, my favorite page XD
he is soo cute! i couldn't resist him at least at his playfully site, so cute XD
i really giggled while reading this
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I love how his father loves the stranger x x x
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He wants to see his daughter off and married, she's been hanging around for years.
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Awww that's what some father like mine opposite chasing them off LOL
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xD I love how Moonbeam yawns at the hunting "skills"!
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Unimpressed Moonbeam is unimpressed.
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lol, he's gotta be losing chunks of his tail from all the vicious chasing. XD
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Luckily he's very nimble from all his previous explots and knows how just keep out of range of your loved one's jaws~
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so... he's not missing tail from the previous exploits? (just saying, she's gotta catch him eventually.) It would be incredibly amusing if he was previously, the fur just grew in a little, so it's hard to tell.
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oh boy! rofl, "PART OF YOUR TAIL IS MISSING!?? WHAT?!?!" "...well, it's your fault..." "NO WAY!" hahahaha
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More like.. "Oh I lost it when you were chasing me." "I didn't do that." "No? Oh, then it must have been that blond over on- why are you looking at me like that?" ._.
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that's a heck of a lot funnier
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i love the story! i hope whe can see more of it in the next days!
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Saw a few typos in there (variety, bringing, playful) but otherwise really good. I especially love the hunting skills and meeting the parents,lol.
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3, 6, and the last panel are my favorites!
Moombeam in unimpressed.
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2nd to last panel = AWESOME.
Especialy Moonbeams face, which is a clear case of 'oh brother *rolls eyes*' XD
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you did a really good job of putting this together 
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lol I love the Third panel. My absolute favorite! ^^
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I really love the flow and depictions of actions on this page. All the expressions and humor worked well together and gave me a good chuckle. x}
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