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MicalPixel [2021-03-09 03:40:26 +0000 UTC]
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ElenArtsy In reply to MicalPixel [2021-03-09 06:34:39 +0000 UTC]
That's very interesting, i like this tip! Personally i love the omniscent narrator but im not very used to it, i always write in the 1st person. I always tend to use the omniscent more but You're right that in this case it woulve been cool.
Its okay, i really appreciate critiques when they're costructive, even regarding writing 🙃❤
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AskYguana2 [2020-04-12 20:57:21 +0000 UTC]
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ElenArtsy In reply to AskYguana2 [2020-04-12 20:59:13 +0000 UTC]
Ah well I made them black because I drew in black and white, tough colored it is supposed to be blond, but I'm glad you like it anyway!
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Clobertina [2020-04-12 19:16:48 +0000 UTC]
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ElenArtsy In reply to Clobertina [2020-04-12 19:17:45 +0000 UTC]
Well... we'll see how it all ends
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DameFallen [2020-04-12 18:57:25 +0000 UTC]
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ElenArtsy In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-12 19:16:54 +0000 UTC]
yes but it's for a good purpose
she doesn't want to hurt him
and he doesn't want to hurt her
so... We'll see how it ends
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ElenArtsy In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-14 19:33:03 +0000 UTC]
Yes me too, I always wish Chara and azzy could be bringed back to life( and I don't mean saved, because i think you already save them both) but due to the mecanics of UT, I think it is hardly actually possible... I mean, version where he comes back to life like Endertale or OTV are really cool, but in the original story Frisk shattering the soul or stuff like thst is quite impossible... That's the sad part, afterall.
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ElenArtsy In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-14 19:42:00 +0000 UTC]
Well yes because he goes back to flowey who is soulless, but if you notice, you have made better his condition in any case, because he has a better morality then before and probably he can even feel a little more (in genocide we find out he can actually feel a very little something, fear). At the end he asks the player to let frisk live their life, and he even reconciliates with Chara after the ending (in facts when he goes back to flowey, he says something like "now I know that my power (determination) was the power you were trying to stop, Chara" or something like that. tough I don't remember very well. I think its cool that chara in genocide wants to gain power, in pacifist wants to stop it.) So Flowey afterall is not fully saved, but he certanly has a better life than before (and I think that he moves to the surface after some time.)
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ElenArtsy In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-15 14:10:43 +0000 UTC]
it would be amazing, but... so impossible
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dream1990 In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-12 19:16:53 +0000 UTC]
he is cool and chara please don't fight your father
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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:25:28 +0000 UTC]
She doesn't really want to... but she has to! I'm partially by Asgore's side, partially by Chara's side, they are both right afterall
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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:27:27 +0000 UTC]
i see and tell me that no monsters or no human children will actually die in this au
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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:29:43 +0000 UTC]
I can't tell you pal. No one knows what will happen, but me, but I won't tell you
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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:31:51 +0000 UTC]
but don't worry, updates will come soon
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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:33:41 +0000 UTC]
i will worry and okay
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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:40:34 +0000 UTC]
Ok, sorry to make you worry XD
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dream1990 In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-12 18:58:03 +0000 UTC]
yeah chara please stop
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dream1990 [2020-04-12 18:50:24 +0000 UTC]
oh god no
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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:13:38 +0000 UTC]
Chara: yes*sobbing*
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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:17:13 +0000 UTC]
I know Chara is showing how she truly feels
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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:18:28 +0000 UTC]
yeah and wait chara is a girl in this
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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:21:03 +0000 UTC]
In this AU, yes, however if you think their gender is different, she doesn't mind whatever pronoums you use. She's mostly a she/them, tbh
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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:22:17 +0000 UTC]
ok and i am going to use her in this au
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