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Published: 2020-04-12 18:44:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1389; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 2
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Description WARNING: READ; THIS IS NOT MEANT TO SHOW CHARA AS EVIL. THINGS ARE NOT ALWAYS AS THEY SEEM.

Chara attacked. 
Asgore wasn't expecting it at all, he didn't even know that the child had a knife with her. A lot of bad memories flew into his mind. He was finally able to dodge only a second before the knife could touch him, he moved to the left and almost fell on the glossy floor. 
"C-Chara! What are you doing?!", The young human turned around and attacked again, but her father quickly moved on the other direction, causing her to hit the hard ground. "My child, are you alright?!", Asgore asked, trying to get closer, but Chara quickly got up, heavily breathing. "You shouldn't... you shouldn't worry about me".
Her hair covered her eyes, but she didn't even mind it, her heart was beating extremely fast, her determination was raising every minute, all to follow her only purpose. Chara pushed fight again, willing to choose that button until Asgore would finally react, unwilling to give up at any cost. Why wouldn't he listen? Why wouldn't he fight back? He just kept dodging, and not even one of Chara's attacks were able to hit him. He was fast, and used to it due to years of war. "Chara, please stop! Why don't we talk about it over a nice cup of tea?". The girl didn't listen, she had a goal to reach, and those words meant nothing more than background noise to her. 
"My child, drop the knife! Things won't end up good this way!", Asgore was getting tired, Chara could feel it. He was used to battles against humans, but dodging every single strike was way harder and more tiring than fighting back. Chara suddenly stopped, looking at how tired her father was, realizing she was as tired as him. "This is the only way! Don't you see it, dad? Monsters will be trapped for centuries if we don't do something! You know this is the only option", the tiny human said, as her voice was trembling of a vibe that was totally unnatural on her, as determination was consuming all her strength, but in the meantime, it was giving her an uncontrollable energy. Suddenly, she attacked, surprising Asgore who, this time, wasn't able to avoid it. The knife got extremely close to his chest, as Asgore was holding Chara's arm with all the resistance he had left, but Chara was holding on as well, with her hands trembling. 
"Chara, listen... You... ", Asgore took a deep breath, his voice was unsettled as well. "You are part of our family, we don't want to lose you...we love you...! So please... please stop doing this".

(P.s. Please forgive some mistakes in the narration, or report them in comments, my English is not very good, but I try by best)

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Comments: 37

MicalPixel [2021-03-09 03:40:26 +0000 UTC]

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ElenArtsy In reply to MicalPixel [2021-03-09 06:34:39 +0000 UTC]

That's very interesting, i like this tip! Personally i love the omniscent narrator but im not very used to it, i always write in the 1st person. I always tend to use the omniscent more but You're right that in this case it woulve been cool.
Its okay, i really appreciate critiques when they're costructive, even regarding writing 🙃❤

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AskYguana2 [2020-04-12 20:57:21 +0000 UTC]

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ElenArtsy In reply to AskYguana2 [2020-04-12 20:59:13 +0000 UTC]

Ah well I made them black because I drew in black and white, tough colored it is supposed to be blond, but I'm glad you like it anyway!

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Clobertina [2020-04-12 19:16:48 +0000 UTC]

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ElenArtsy In reply to Clobertina [2020-04-12 19:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Well... we'll see how it all ends

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DameFallen [2020-04-12 18:57:25 +0000 UTC]

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ElenArtsy In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-12 19:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Chara yes *sobbing*

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DameFallen In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:15:07 +0000 UTC]

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ElenArtsy In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-12 19:16:54 +0000 UTC]

yes but it's for a good purpose
she doesn't want to hurt him
and he doesn't want to hurt her
so... We'll see how it ends

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DameFallen In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:32:47 +0000 UTC]

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ElenArtsy In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-12 19:33:21 +0000 UTC]

 

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DameFallen In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-14 19:27:24 +0000 UTC]

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ElenArtsy In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-14 19:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Yes me too, I always wish Chara and azzy could be bringed back to life( and I don't mean saved, because i think you already save them both) but due to the mecanics of UT, I think it is hardly actually possible... I mean, version where he comes back to life like Endertale or OTV are really cool, but in the original story Frisk shattering the soul or stuff like thst is quite impossible... That's the sad part, afterall.

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DameFallen In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-14 19:34:13 +0000 UTC]

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ElenArtsy In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-14 19:42:00 +0000 UTC]

Well yes because he goes back to flowey who is soulless, but if you notice, you have made better his condition in any case, because he has a better morality then before and probably he can even feel a little more (in genocide we find out he can actually feel a very little something, fear). At the end he asks the player to let frisk live their life, and he even reconciliates with Chara after the ending (in facts when he goes back to flowey, he says something like "now I know that my power (determination) was the power you were trying to stop, Chara" or something like that. tough I don't remember very well. I think its cool that chara in genocide wants to gain power, in pacifist wants to stop it.) So Flowey afterall is not fully saved, but he certanly has a better life than before (and I think that he moves to the surface after some time.)

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DameFallen In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-15 14:00:05 +0000 UTC]

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ElenArtsy In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-15 14:10:43 +0000 UTC]

it would be amazing, but... so impossible

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dream1990 In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-12 19:16:53 +0000 UTC]

he is cool and chara please don't fight your father 

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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:25:28 +0000 UTC]

She doesn't really want to... but she has to! I'm partially by Asgore's side, partially by Chara's side, they are both right afterall

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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:27:27 +0000 UTC]

i see and tell me that no monsters or no human children will actually die in this au

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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:29:43 +0000 UTC]

I can't tell you pal. No one knows what will happen, but me, but I won't tell you 

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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:30:21 +0000 UTC]

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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:31:51 +0000 UTC]

but don't worry, updates will come soon 

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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:33:41 +0000 UTC]

i will worry and okay

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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:40:34 +0000 UTC]

Ok, sorry to make you worry XD

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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:43:22 +0000 UTC]

okay

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dream1990 In reply to DameFallen [2020-04-12 18:58:03 +0000 UTC]

yeah chara please stop

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dream1990 [2020-04-12 18:50:24 +0000 UTC]

oh god no

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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:13:38 +0000 UTC]

Chara: yes*sobbing*

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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:15:51 +0000 UTC]

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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:17:13 +0000 UTC]

I know Chara is showing how she truly feels 

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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:18:28 +0000 UTC]

yeah and wait chara is a girl in this

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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:21:03 +0000 UTC]

In this AU, yes, however if you think their gender is different, she doesn't mind whatever pronoums you use. She's mostly a she/them, tbh

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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:22:17 +0000 UTC]

ok and i am going to use her in this au 

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ElenArtsy In reply to dream1990 [2020-04-12 19:22:42 +0000 UTC]

ok!!!! 

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dream1990 In reply to ElenArtsy [2020-04-12 19:25:24 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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