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elephantshoe13 — Just Another Whore [NSFW]
Published: 2009-11-30 03:49:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 127; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description I close my eyes and try not to cry
as I lay half naked in a room full of
strangers.

All eyes are on me.

On the weak, pathetic girl
who just couldn't own up.
On the stupid whore who
just couldn't say no.

But what about him?
The asshole sitting in the corner
with his stupid fucking magazine.

Why am I the only one who is hurting and bleeding?
Why am I the only one who is having a hard time?

You can never know how it felt
to have her tear my insides to shreds.

And you don't even want to know.

It's not fair!

It's not fair that I'm so fucked up
over this.

It's not fair that you can so easily
forget.

Well, forget you.
Forget you and fuck this.
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Comments: 4

warzoneangel [2009-12-20 01:57:11 +0000 UTC]

Don't revise this... it is perfect the way it is. The emotions behind it are so powerful, to revise it would be to remove some of that power.

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elephantshoe13 In reply to warzoneangel [2009-12-24 00:00:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I suppose I might listen to you and not revise it.

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warzoneangel In reply to elephantshoe13 [2009-12-24 17:00:48 +0000 UTC]

That's nice to hear.

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greg-kowalski [2009-11-30 10:40:00 +0000 UTC]

...this is not stupid. Don't lie to me about your poems being stupid. Yes? Good.

-sending you some love-
xoxo

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