Comments: 162
TheChaoswithinOrder [2012-05-29 08:08:20 +0000 UTC]
I saw the ending coming but damn, is it a little sweet...
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BLEACH-Luv [2012-04-25 07:37:31 +0000 UTC]
loved the surprise ending!
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Starkpretty [2012-03-01 12:20:53 +0000 UTC]
DID NOT EXPECT ENDING snxfrgghhhhhhhhhhh
Wow, that was really lovely. I love how you had me believing all the way through that it really was a life or death situation, and then the cute bit at the end blew that one out of the water.
Really beautifully written. <3
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RvB234 [2011-10-07 21:34:03 +0000 UTC]
I see that you have Rapture symbol. Big fan too?
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ElfyOne13 In reply to RvB234 [2011-10-15 06:48:34 +0000 UTC]
I am indeed~ I have written some fan fictions if you'd like to check them out. :3
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SlaveDan [2011-10-05 23:39:11 +0000 UTC]
Great story. Writen well!
As an slave (The girl who have this account sleeping) I just liked to read that.
The fear I felling, but then the pleasure that comes.
Great.
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Noah-Of-Chance [2011-09-24 18:12:20 +0000 UTC]
that was epic! it was totally believable at the beginning....i really thought it was gonna be a rape fic, but it turned out to be a game *¬* and a very....interesting....game XD
so, this can be summed up in one word: SMEXY!!!!
love it lots and well written XD mega fav
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bevinlova [2011-09-03 14:58:05 +0000 UTC]
ahhh this is so long but i like it
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constantinehamada199 [2011-08-26 23:10:24 +0000 UTC]
O//////O hehehehehe!!!!!!!!!! Thank you. From my pervy self.
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CadburyBunnies [2011-08-24 20:58:44 +0000 UTC]
This was freakn' brilliant. I love it.
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xLu-Lux [2011-08-21 17:34:57 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely wonderful! Had lots of twists and turns, a steamy sex scene, and an unexpected ending! Bravo!
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siyeh75 [2011-08-09 19:32:45 +0000 UTC]
I keep reading this again and again. I just love the story.
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XXXYaoiLoveXXX [2011-08-05 18:03:41 +0000 UTC]
It was great! love it!
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iquack1 [2011-07-28 19:46:11 +0000 UTC]
WHAT WAS THIS A ROLE PLAY!??!! O^O it sounded so real...
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Katnappe13 [2011-07-22 00:41:53 +0000 UTC]
It was so intense and dramatic! I was on the edge of my seat and then... WHAAAAAAAAAT?! xD Haha, great plot twist! You are a very talented writer.
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DarkAngel222 [2011-07-14 21:36:15 +0000 UTC]
-rolls laughing.- Aaaaaw hell... That was frigging cute.
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smallchance [2011-07-12 22:46:41 +0000 UTC]
I really like the plot twist at the end.
i give it a nine and a half! such detail! ^_^
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EmmaVirus [2011-07-11 03:41:53 +0000 UTC]
what a masochistic relationship...
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MRBHMansonatemyheart [2011-07-06 17:07:51 +0000 UTC]
hu i wonder if i can do this were i work
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emikitty1999 [2011-06-29 18:28:35 +0000 UTC]
AMAZING. I LOVED IT.
...But you don't know how weird it was to read this when your nephew's name is Keaton.
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avatarjasmin [2011-06-28 07:43:03 +0000 UTC]
At the end I was like, but it was very well written
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chickmonkey13 [2011-06-21 05:54:20 +0000 UTC]
i've read this one tons of times and each time i can't help but think "i love how the author puts in little hints that they're together through out the story"! one of the best, it actually sounds like a story.
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mrRosabel [2011-06-14 23:30:04 +0000 UTC]
.......
Oh...well.... I read it carefully, and it was highly enjoyable
all the way....yes sir it was!!! LOVE!
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TheOnyxRaven [2011-06-08 21:08:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow i had to read the ending twice to get it >.< you so fooled me that was awesome
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hazeadisson [2011-06-04 12:07:39 +0000 UTC]
Adorable ending. xD Very nice.
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Quiiver [2011-05-28 09:36:53 +0000 UTC]
hot. very, very hot. that is all.
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lightningwolves [2011-03-24 23:23:58 +0000 UTC]
i officially love you! well done, thoroughly enjoyed, you are an inspiration to me
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EchoesOfVoices [2011-03-20 21:11:35 +0000 UTC]
PFFFFFFFFT.
Yes.
xDD
<3
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Warsfeil [2011-03-19 14:29:56 +0000 UTC]
Best. Story. Ever!
MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE!
<3
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KyposTing [2011-01-28 02:42:12 +0000 UTC]
before anything... I laughed so hard when I realized what was going on. I thought that it was gonna be obvious "he's gonna wanna do it with his rapist, yippie." but then the ending. lololololololololol
I wanna be a bad cop :C
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JotePaine [2011-01-13 04:53:59 +0000 UTC]
*blush* I have many words to say about this and they're all really good but I'm soo overwhelmed by this I can't pick the best word! I love yaoi! Even though I'm not too sure I could write a lemon... +fave
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me20723 [2011-01-12 01:48:17 +0000 UTC]
im confused! I dont get it at the beginning it was like Keaton had jumped him like against his will. But at the end it seemed like roleplay because gabriel called it a 'game'.
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ThePoetOfTheWest [2011-01-11 00:39:39 +0000 UTC]
This story was really good. I downloaded it and went to bed, reading it as a bedtime story. Hehe, I really loved it. This piece keeps being interesting, you read, get horny, read more, get more horny, read more and get even more horny.
I loved this piece for the long but great sex scene. Bravo!
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mamakanaynay [2011-01-05 01:12:36 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS JUST.... ORGASMIC. God I just keep finding better and better stories! Agh, but these are the best. Incredible writing! I couldn't stop. Now I should probably start my homework...
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Sakimichi-Sama [2010-12-18 22:15:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh. GOD. I DIED RIGHT THAR BECAUSE OF HOW HOT THIS IS
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