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Readera [2009-07-24 22:11:02 +0000 UTC]
Wow how pretty!
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May-be-Lee [2009-07-24 21:16:57 +0000 UTC]
I love it! She's so pretty! She has an interesting story, too. Her dress, with all it's pearls and details, looks so beautiful~ And I love how, though the Sun is clearly represented in her dress bodice, you have the moon in her head dress. And- *yaygasp!* freckles! Yaaay!
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May-be-Lee In reply to elila [2009-07-24 21:44:30 +0000 UTC]
Aww, but freckles are so pretty!
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May-be-Lee In reply to elila [2009-07-24 21:50:39 +0000 UTC]
That's no fun!
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PadfootsPuppy [2009-07-24 18:30:38 +0000 UTC]
^^ The artwork is amazing and I really liked the story behind her.
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Sugar-Senshi [2009-07-24 17:06:38 +0000 UTC]
Very pretty! Love the gold beads. ^^
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DanuDaughter [2009-07-24 13:46:54 +0000 UTC]
I love her dress, and her expression and pose are fantastic!
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silver-eyes-blue [2009-07-24 08:24:59 +0000 UTC]
Oooh, she's pretty! ^^ It seems like the women belonging to the Moon Legacy periodically get a tad "evil". XD Then they gradually become nicer again. XD
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silver-eyes-blue In reply to elila [2009-07-24 13:38:02 +0000 UTC]
Well, a bad-ish apple or not, I like her! :3
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silver-eyes-blue In reply to elila [2009-07-24 13:52:53 +0000 UTC]
I probably would want to kick my Helia in the nose, too, if we ever really met, but it is nice to drag her through all kinds of evil events. XD
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UnseenVision [2009-07-24 06:57:24 +0000 UTC]
She's really pretty and her dress is magnificent.
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puff222001 [2009-07-24 06:55:02 +0000 UTC]
She sounds kind of mean, but I love her design. Poor Selenity just doesn't have a good setup, does she?
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puff222001 In reply to elila [2009-07-24 20:39:27 +0000 UTC]
I agree. Not every single person in any line of royalty can be perfect. One of my as-yet unnamed moon queens actually started a war with Kimoku as a means to prove her power. She was a few generations before Serenity, but she began the feeling that the moon people were abusing their powers.
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PaperIz [2009-07-24 06:21:55 +0000 UTC]
that's awesome! like completely! lol gud job!
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PaperIz In reply to PaperIz [2009-07-24 06:23:02 +0000 UTC]
oh and in like 90 deviations I'll be at 1000! I'll have to some crazy thing for it lol
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galacticpink [2009-07-24 03:52:31 +0000 UTC]
I should start planning for my 100th deviation since I'm at 68. X3
And I love her backstory! But whatever happened to the sun kingdom?
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elila In reply to galacticpink [2009-07-24 10:16:55 +0000 UTC]
It's inhabitants mostly went down together with everything else when Metaria decided to get pissy. Although it's still there, no one remembers it and the only one still residing there is my Sailor Sol.
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galacticpink In reply to elila [2009-07-24 10:33:35 +0000 UTC]
Yeah no kidding. I TRIED to prune it. The rough draft was 12K words. I say 3k isn't a bad bit of pruning. It's gotta be cause its a novelization of a video game rather than an original fanfiction (oxymoron much? XD)
Books I and III are original, but Book II is a novelization with a truckload of added characterization. Ness being a silent protagonist and all that. XD
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