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Elisa-Feliz — Alienigena
Published: 2010-11-18 21:40:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 1144; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 27
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This is one of the illustrations i've been doing for the film/graphic novel project that i've been working on for the last 7 months. I haven't been allowed to show any concepts or anything, but since we're not using this one, i guess i can show. I rushed this, so i might go back and do some changes. The size is 9x13 inches.© Vintage Independent Productions / XSIDE Comics
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Comments: 8
Cool. I always get the warm and fuzzies when I see comic art drawn on Eon Boards. Nice work too!
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As with many if not all artwork, improvements can always be made. In the case of this piece it's easy to get nitpicky, especially when asking for a critique. The treads on the vehicle to the left don't seem to line up right. The anatomy of the guy on the floor seems a bit too flat. Contrast and drapery are on. Compposition? Also pretty good. I would move the main figures to the left so the dead dude's hand isn't cutoff. Then zoom in a little more on them without losing background essential for visual narrative. Remember (and I am sure you know) that you can place the main focus anywhere on the page, not just in the center of the page. Again though..nitpicky. With me you have a fan of you past and future work. Can't wait to see what IS used.
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sorry i posted here. I wasn't paying attention.
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i dunno what is that but cool job 
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