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ella-enchanted — A Brief Interlude
Published: 2006-11-04 04:32:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 346; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description The pain hit her like a blow. For a moment she was blinded to all else; her vision was blackened and she could taste acrid iron. Then her eyes began to clear and the world seemed to melt back into focus. She blinked furiously in the suddenly bright light, and struggled to raise her head. Her mouth felt as if it was stuffed with cotton wool, and her ears were filled with a shrill ringing.

As her brain slowly began to register her surroundings, she bit her lip, drawing blood, and tried to keep herself from withdrawing into primal fear. She was hunched over an endless plain of dried grass, utterly exposed. Apart from a few vague shapes in the middle distance – grazers perhaps – she was alone in a strange world. For a moment, she refused to believe her own senses. She struggled to reassure herself that the pain she had only recently felt was nothing more than a delusion, this place a mere manifestation of her own fear and confusion. She wished to believe that she would wake up at any moment.

She continued to struggle to rearrange her thoughts for more than an hour; the only sounds her troubled mutterings and the whisper of the dry wind in the grass. Suddenly a shock ran through her, electrifying her very flesh. She blinked rapidly, and the world seemed to ooze into blackness. The pain hit her like a blow…
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Comments: 8

mynameisanna [2006-12-12 08:18:07 +0000 UTC]

hmm i also remember reading these in good old study lesson lol i think i liked the first person one best but i like this perspective too ur a great writer

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ella-enchanted In reply to mynameisanna [2006-12-12 08:28:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Anna that means a lot coming from you. :]]

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Elvis-Prophet [2006-11-24 06:42:25 +0000 UTC]

Holey fucking shit hole
That sounds like the hangover i had on sunday morning last weekend Nah jokin elle
YOU have really good writing potential
I love it. I sit there and read ur stuff with my mouth open its that intense.
Good stuff. XOemily

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Dark-Angel-90 [2006-11-04 11:41:10 +0000 UTC]

I believe i have read this before, and i remember liking it the first time, once again your writing skills are amazing, good work

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ella-enchanted In reply to Dark-Angel-90 [2006-11-04 12:41:52 +0000 UTC]

I heart Beardo and his lovely comments that make me feel warm and fuzzy.

ellllllllllla x

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Dark-Angel-90 In reply to ella-enchanted [2006-11-04 14:46:30 +0000 UTC]

I heart you too Elle, i'm just returning the favour for all the wonderful comments you've left on my work

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Welcome-to-Poserland [2006-11-04 05:36:26 +0000 UTC]

I remember reading the three versions of this. Except I have no idea which one i liked best at the time. Can you do me a favour? I'll tell you what it is when you come online...

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ella-enchanted In reply to Welcome-to-Poserland [2006-11-04 12:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Hey you never told me what the favour was.

xx ellllllla

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