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Published: 2011-12-19 00:03:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1146; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 25
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Art trade with ~x-UndeadKitty-xI feel guilty because she asked for deformed eye girl possessing another girl in a bathroom scene, and I really didn't do that. I wasn't on my computer when I started it, and I only had typical japanese possession in mind. I will make it up to you, twisted eyes are always something interesting to draw.
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she is japanese...and her eyes do that once in a while.
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she is? so you're half jap? dude, can I get a picture of you?
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hahah i dont look it at all
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I wanna seeeee! I don't mind if you don't look so much. ;___; plz
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hahahaha! you will be disaapooiinntteedddd!
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les formes ici sont... incroyables. C'est vraiment interestant. Tes travaille sont toujours different que ca d'autre personne. Bon travaille
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les couleurs sont.... wow
les jambes aussi...
j'suis juste pas sΓ»re par rapport a la culotte qui dΓ©passe,
enfin, je sais pas, c'est vraiment un joli dΓ©tail mais Γ§a me semble pas assez entre les jambes.
peu importe, c'est beau. bravi bravi!
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nonono I like the face, you told me you had a drawing block with faces and I said its obviously gone now. The only thing I would do is maybe change the size of the iris to make it a little more round. anyway, I will try to explain the torso. I would move the belly button more the the right and give the torso a twist inbetween the pelvis and ribs. The shirt that you drew doesnt give off the feeling that a bra is being worn, although i may be wrong its just my opinion and it looks strange with the cleavage lines in the middle. I think they should spread a little more naturally, even if she is wearing a bra. the size of the breast on the right is a tiny bit bigger, which is good. i would also try and drop the shoulder on the left back behind the breast/head a little more. The leg on the right hand side could cover the other leg a little more and the pelvis on the side could also poke out a little more. haha, i like the skirt cameltoe by the way 
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I see what you mean. I'm agreeing with the bellybutton and the left shoulder, but as for the legs and the breasts it was totally as I wanted it to be. Maybe she doesn't have a bra but the upper part of her shirt is supposed to be tight, hence the boobcrack. But I should have done almost no breasts at all, I don't know, I'll try again because I love how japanese characters like Ryuko Azuma does are soooo pretty and delicate. <3
Thanks again for the advice, man.
Oh and the videos you sent me were so damn slow and not really relevant I'm sorry I really couldn't stand it. I'm still open if you have more things to suggest though.
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Thanks for reminding me about Ryuko again! got some good inspiration going.
Sorry, about that :/
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Still badass nonetheless, I can always appreciate a creepy Asian girl. I love how you use colours and lines in everything you do.
Like I said, my half is in the works nao.
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amazing hands and arms as always and great use of the green/blues. the hip and perspective of the torso feels a little uncomfortable though. the simplistic background is very effective as well, sweet job. Your face skills are obviously back again, haha.
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yeah I wasn't sure about the face. go on about the torso though, what do you mean? maybe a little too wide? I tried to give it less curves than my usual characters because Japanese girls tend to be more flat...
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[link] This guy has a bunch of videos where he goes through the deviantart from page critiquing. Its really helpful if you have time.
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