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MEEEEEHHHHHH!?!?1?1?1?!
why did you stop?!?!?!
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I wait for the rest. It's just wonderful. Each characters are IC - this could be enough: it's so rare read fanfiction or doujinshi where Nami doesn't mistread Sanji xD - and the story is interesting and original.
You're very good to make comics, I laugh a lot with the funnier ones! xD
Continue sooooon
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Oookay 
Thanks so much btw 
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Of course you're right, or they'll look like robots. I mean, obviously Nami is Nami, Sanji is Sanji, but in some occasions - also in the manga - they're more emotive and kinder. It's natural, it's human. I really like this sory, I'm sure you'll do a wonderful job until the end!
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Yeah, I think the same, honestly^^ 
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LOL XD Very nice and sweet XD
Sanji - Odas Courage XD
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uuuh, what will happen to her...this cant be not dangerous O.o
ah, btw: i love this lil story =3
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It's really cute so far. I was going to offer to BETA it, but beat me to the punch. Keep up the awesome SXN doujin.
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Wow, this is so cool; can't wait to see what happens next!
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Yaaaay, more SxN stuff! And a doujin, too! I *LOVE* your facial expressions and body language, it's so expressive and fun. I can't wait to see more of this!
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I love your SxN stuff! <3<3<3 I look forward to more!! *waits for the next pages*
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Thanks 
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Is that a Courage the Cowardly Dog reference I see on panel 9?
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I never tought about it till you asked X3
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I tend to notice these things. I really love your style. I'm not a much of a SnajiXNami fan but you converted me
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Whee~ I love this doujin! >w< It's so awesome!
...that I had to Beta it, even if you already posted, and you're not gunna change it... >.>...
Bubbles separated by two lines, pages separated by eight and a "Page ---". Gramatially and punctuayionally correct, but a few things had to be refraised to make sense >.<
Ahh! What beautiful weather!
...and a beautiful day, because you're with me, Nami-San! It's so sweet that you escorted me shopping!
Ony because I had to buy some new clothes! So don't dream to much, Okay?
Hmm... Weird... The wind became stronger!
Nami-saan! You don't need to be shy! I know you're just confused!
Will you cut it out?!
It isn't a date, and I don't love you! Get it!?
Don't say...
By the way, I think we should hurry! The weathers going to be blowy...
AI-AI, Captain!
I say, and mean it too, if you don't stop your annoying chivalry, you'll meet my right hand punch!
Page Two:
Well hello there, my sweetheart!
Sigh... It was very expensive, but now, for once in my life, I'll admit it: This preciouse was worth every Beli!
Ho-wow! Looks really beautifull, Nami-san!
But nothing's more beautiful than you, my preciouse!
What did I tell you about chivalry?
HEY! BIRD! STOP!!!
GIVE IT BACK!!! I MAY BE A THEIF, TOO, BUT THIS IS THE ONLY THING I DIDN'T STEAL!
Leave it to me...
...if that ring is really important to you...
I will be, too! Don't worry!
I meant about the ring...
BE CAREFULL, OKAY?!?
QUACK?!?
OI! YOU SHITTY BIRD!!
Page Three:
QUUAAaaaaack!
DROP IT RIGHT NOW!
Whoops!
NO! PLEASE NO!
DARN! SO DARN!
And for the third time, DARN! I'll never find it in water this deep!
WHERE DID YOU GO? YOU SHOULD COME OUT, IT'S DANGEROUS!
CAN YOU HEAR ME?!!
Page 4
Wasn't she the one who tould me to hurry?
P-fuh!
THANKS ALOT, IDIOT!
I CAN'T FIND MY RING NOW!
Does it matter? A winds closeing in! You have to get out of the water right now!
I'm not going anywhere 'till I find it! You should help me, after what you've done!
NAMI-SAN! DON'T BE SILLY!
IT'S JUST A RING! HOW COULD A JEWEL BE MORE IMPORTANT THAN YOUR SAFTEY?!?
HEY!!!
IT'S NOT JUST A RING! IT'S MY RING, AND IT WAS VERY EXPENSIVE!
FINE THEN! If you won't help me, then stay on your butt. Wait up for me at least!
Sheesh...
The things I do for love...
Geeze, once in a life I want his help, and then he doesn't...
HEY! It looks like...
WHAT LUCK! MY RING!
Thank God it didn't fall deeper...
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I told you my grammar is horrible
Thanks the correcting If I'll had some freetime I put the correct text in.
And glad that you like it still 
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It's okay, doesn't interfere with the reading process. ^-^ If you want I can go through for the rest of the pages before you post them, to avoid any mistakes?
And of couse I still like it! How could I not?
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Oh that woulda be fine thank you
If I couldn't set out ther text somewhere, I think I'll accept your help
Thanx again
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I love your style ^_____^ !! I wanna see more, the story looks great
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Well, I'm hooked, but that's a given XD Brilliant so far, and I'm sure the rest will blow me away just as much!
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*Glompage* 
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Nagyon cukik
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Hát időhiány X3 Nemsoká vizsgaidőszak aztán még kihasználom azt a pici időt amit lehet
Amúgy köszke örülök hogy tetszik
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I can't wait wait for the next pages, too!
It's a great dojin
More, more, more!
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Wows...can't wait for the next page! Awesomeness!
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