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Sarelm [2009-09-28 22:23:55 +0000 UTC]
Yep, my third time reading it, and the only comment I could come up with is... I'm still trying to figure out what she is. Purple eyes? The hint of fangs? I know you weren't going for human but... I can't figure out... Half human something? I'd say Vampire, but I know you don't do vampires... >.>;; I'll figure this out. Just you watch.
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Elliwiny In reply to Sarelm [2009-09-28 22:29:36 +0000 UTC]
>.>
<.<
Actually she's not mine, and she totally is a vampire.
[link]
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Sarelm In reply to Elliwiny [2009-09-29 00:54:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh. Oooooooh.
...... o.o Oh.
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haius [2009-09-01 06:56:24 +0000 UTC]
Jack's so sweet.
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One-Tail-Kitsune [2009-08-27 01:20:15 +0000 UTC]
He's such a prick. You'd think a guy who loves Christmas so much would be a little nicer to the kids. Oh, and I loved it when he snatched his journal away.
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dragol [2009-08-24 20:36:00 +0000 UTC]
You've make it so touched. Great story.
And Jack is so Jack here, even more. :3
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StalkedByDragons [2009-08-24 02:52:56 +0000 UTC]
I have a thousand things I'd like to say about this but every time I open my mouth all that comes out is ecstatic and uber happy burbling. My GOD this is full of win of the most epic variety. You don't even know. :I
When I hit the Kyan " I don't know about Christmas" I actually squealed and said IT'S ABOUT TIME IT WAS OFFICIALLY ADDRESSED. Also they still make a cute couple.
I can feel the giddy burbling coming back again, so I'll just say more please! 8D Athsadaghsth! <3
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Elliwiny In reply to StalkedByDragons [2009-09-07 13:21:14 +0000 UTC]
Hurr, sorry it's taken so long to reply...
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU! 8D
Hee, yeah. No Christmas for Kyan. ;~;
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boredbuthappy [2009-08-23 15:47:28 +0000 UTC]
you're a mean one Mr. Frost
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Beanjamish In reply to boredbuthappy [2009-08-23 16:30:35 +0000 UTC]
Your brain is full of spiders and your soul is full of gunk, Mr. Frooooooost~
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HamsterMasterSamster [2009-08-23 11:07:17 +0000 UTC]
I am so envious of your scripting @_@ andartskillsandflashskills >____> This is an amazing interlude. Jack versus Dawn is genius, Madic's brooding presence was great and you even got Harlan/Solt in there. Loved your medbots by the way XD BOOP BOOP BOOP!
In fact, I'm gonna read it again from the start RIGHT NOW :'D
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Clock-workable [2009-08-23 10:37:24 +0000 UTC]
If she not gonna eat that cookie can I have it?
hehe.
great entry, Jack needs to work on his attitude towards kids.
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Elliwiny In reply to Clock-workable [2009-08-24 11:38:03 +0000 UTC]
Five second rule, it's still good. >.>
...Then again, it's the Spire we're talking about. o__<
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Clock-workable In reply to Elliwiny [2009-08-24 11:44:18 +0000 UTC]
*starts to eat gingerbreadman* nom, nom hm?
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Aeovis [2009-08-23 08:59:37 +0000 UTC]
You do not. Touch. Rachel. D:<
And oh god, the medbots~<3 XDD
And Kyan doesn't know Christmas-- This leaves opportunity for some maaajor ranting-- or for something very cute[[in a Jack sort of way, naturally]] of him trying to give her a feel of Christmas... >w>
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Aeovis In reply to Elliwiny [2009-08-25 05:10:35 +0000 UTC]
It took me a bit to figure out what you were talking about in the first part about snowmen and ponies.
...Which led me to the thought of "Kyan = My Little Pony"
...........
Oh oh, and let's not forget.... Mistletoe~<3
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Fluna [2009-08-23 08:22:36 +0000 UTC]
Medbots are so cute >w< and I like how you drew Madic.
I feel sorry for that little girl ;w; Jack you must be nice with her if someday you're going to be father!
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Elliwiny In reply to Fluna [2009-08-24 11:35:07 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thanks!
Hahaha, Jack would make a terrible father. X3
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manicyelowcat [2009-08-23 03:32:58 +0000 UTC]
The script was great and this is brilliant as well.
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nokki [2009-08-23 03:32:27 +0000 UTC]
Jack got attacked ... by a little girl! 8D He totally deserved it.
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sincerely In reply to nokki [2009-08-23 19:42:51 +0000 UTC]
Jack has now been beaten up by four ladies, six times since he arrived on the spire...
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nokki In reply to sincerely [2009-08-23 19:56:01 +0000 UTC]
what a sad record
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BeckKeep [2009-08-23 03:25:23 +0000 UTC]
The nurse robots are adorable.
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Beanjamish [2009-08-23 02:42:43 +0000 UTC]
Jack's a dick ._.
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Elliwiny In reply to Beanjamish [2009-08-23 17:35:33 +0000 UTC]
I know, right? ._____.
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egriz [2009-08-23 02:09:04 +0000 UTC]
Jack is a fail adult when it comes ot being appropriate to kids. XD
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Elliwiny In reply to egriz [2009-08-24 11:33:20 +0000 UTC]
There's no way I'm letting this man be a dad.
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Gold-Paladin [2009-08-23 01:57:52 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhh, Jack... what a bastard! But hey, you still gotta love him! lD
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StrikeSlash [2009-08-23 01:37:07 +0000 UTC]
Wow, she's right. He is a Scrooge.... Though he got what he deserved. This was a very entertaining read. I can't wait until your next match! Good luck!
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CaptainWii [2009-08-23 01:29:33 +0000 UTC]
The Medbots bring me joy.
And, as sad as it was, the kick to the shins did as well.
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Orannis0 [2009-08-23 01:23:45 +0000 UTC]
ATTACK OF THE SINGING MEDBOTS! XD
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Izuma [2009-08-23 01:20:14 +0000 UTC]
Madic is amazing here @A@
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Elliwiny In reply to Izuma [2009-08-23 17:33:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
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ClosetExtrovert [2009-08-23 01:16:54 +0000 UTC]
SHIN KIIIIICK!
... And... d'aww, that means Kyan doesn't know about mistletoe. :c
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Elliwiny In reply to ClosetExtrovert [2009-08-23 17:33:11 +0000 UTC]
SHIN KICK indeed! She learned from the best, it seems. >w>
Jack can teach her aaaaaaall about mistletoe.
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Orange-Castle [2009-08-23 01:11:21 +0000 UTC]
Jack totally deserved that.
eee some peeps are gettin' soft <3
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Orange-Castle In reply to Elliwiny [2009-08-23 23:37:28 +0000 UTC]
that and robots have a thing for him. D:
BOOP!
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