khrisjuhlin [2009-04-26 14:49:10 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Impact
First of all - wow. Really enjoy this piece! It is so symmetrical, geometrical, it's amazing.There is good contrast between the white and the black giving enphasis on that pentagon shape. I think that darker shade in the end of the bridge really makes the shape of the arch; it really gives that important touch to give it more impact.The shadows and reflections on the floor and glass makes it more interesting to look at; there is more texture. Moreover, excelent sense of depth.How could it be improved? A bit more contrast between the black, white and grey. Other than that I can't pin-point anything.Good work e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
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jotamyg [2009-04-27 16:27:10 +0000 UTC]
I like it!!! Well done
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elolitta In reply to jotamyg [2009-05-08 15:59:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
Aimelle [2009-02-08 08:03:18 +0000 UTC]
well done
elolitta In reply to Aimelle [2009-02-08 14:08:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Do you think that this version is better as the coloured one? (-> [link] )
Aimelle In reply to elolitta [2009-02-19 07:41:31 +0000 UTC]
oh so sorry for replying just now... aww.. I definitely prefer the color version. it has great contrast and clarity !, beautiful colors and even the floor texture is better to me on the color one.
elolitta In reply to Aimelle [2009-02-20 15:55:44 +0000 UTC]
thanks very much for the comment