bagarsmurf75 [2016-11-20 13:55:24 +0000 UTC]
This was a good one. While Crissy and Liv grated on my nerves everytime one of them opened their mouth, that at least means you nailed their characters... But for me it was Moiras transformation (once it got underway) that really took the cake. All in all, a good read, keep up the good work!
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ElRoy1999 In reply to bagarsmurf75 [2016-11-20 15:22:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I really appreciate the feedback. As to Crissy and Liv, I meant to do that. It's quite bizarrely annoying to even write this.
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