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ElsieGuen In reply to ??? [2022-02-28 13:31:40 +0000 UTC]
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Prohaft [2021-01-21 10:11:13 +0000 UTC]
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Prohaft In reply to ElsieGuen [2021-06-08 12:17:26 +0000 UTC]
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Prohaft [2020-03-22 12:07:29 +0000 UTC]
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ElsieGuen In reply to Prohaft [2020-03-22 14:36:51 +0000 UTC]
Ah no, sorry. I have no idea. Sometimes, if I get in a flow, I write a story very quickly. Sometimes it takes years to finish. And I really want to finish the complete story before part 2 is published.
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jderril [2020-01-11 07:09:19 +0000 UTC]
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ElsieGuen In reply to jderril [2020-01-13 19:32:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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Prohaft [2019-12-14 10:48:25 +0000 UTC]
when is the next part going to be released?
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ElsieGuen In reply to Prohaft [2019-12-14 13:16:01 +0000 UTC]
Good question. In the past months, I have been writing a lot on this story. It has gone from 3,500 words to over 30,000 and it still isn't finished. And I want to have it completely finished before I start publishing new parts. So please be patient!
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ElsieGuen In reply to jderril [2020-01-14 07:17:01 +0000 UTC]
I am not sure about those changes, but they might be necessary, although the changes wouldn't be very big. There is some foreshadowing, which could be formulated a bit different. And I'm not satisfied about the title. The story is about two developing young muscle girls, not just about heavy lifting.
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ElsieGuen In reply to jderril [2020-01-14 14:57:14 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure about the effect of a title change. The link from Google will be broken for some time, I guess. And I don't know about DA, but I can imagine that title changes aren't rewarded. I'll think about it.
And no, still not on Discord!
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Prohaft In reply to ElsieGuen [2020-03-01 12:40:47 +0000 UTC]
Yeah im already waiting a long time for the continue
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jderril In reply to ElsieGuen [2020-01-14 17:12:20 +0000 UTC]
I doubt it really will be broken. Technically the Id of the page won't change. Only the title.
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Aramisxx [2019-09-03 23:31:47 +0000 UTC]
In my opinion I like a good story of having stronger sisters that are protective as they are loving, and hope these sisters love their brother while they still have him around.
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ElsieGuen In reply to Aramisxx [2019-09-04 13:22:40 +0000 UTC]
Most of my characters are (more or less) kind, and the twins aren't an exception!
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Aramisxx In reply to ElsieGuen [2019-09-05 06:17:36 +0000 UTC]
Sweet I hope the twins show their love for their brother, because once their parents are gone he will be all the family that have left until they get boyfriends of their own
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ElsieGuen In reply to Aramisxx [2019-09-05 16:39:26 +0000 UTC]
Well, I don't think their parents have plans to go.
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Aramisxx In reply to ElsieGuen [2019-09-06 00:50:35 +0000 UTC]
Not like a vacation I meant when they die he is the only blood relative they will have
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ElsieGuen In reply to Aramisxx [2019-09-06 15:55:59 +0000 UTC]
I see! But I don't think their parents will die soon.
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ElsieGuen In reply to NatalyaMusc [2019-08-21 19:09:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I can imagine there are also drawbacks for having two younger sisters who are so much stronger than you...
And I hope their last name sounds Dutch, because their first names are very very Dutch
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Krysnha [2019-08-09 05:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Not bad, not bad at all
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Krysnha In reply to ElsieGuen [2019-08-09 18:15:36 +0000 UTC]
your welcome, do you accept ideas
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ElsieGuen In reply to Krysnha [2019-08-10 15:36:32 +0000 UTC]
Not really, but you can always give it a try.
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Krysnha In reply to ElsieGuen [2019-08-10 17:08:14 +0000 UTC]
well, what about these idea, these sisters, during a hot summer, with an air conditioning broken, they decide to a strong workout, if the idea is nice or intrest i can give more elaborate and i well i can dos stories and such
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ElsieGuen In reply to Krysnha [2019-08-17 15:00:21 +0000 UTC]
The main storyline is already in my head. Sorry, this doesn't fit.
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Krysnha In reply to ElsieGuen [2019-08-17 21:02:06 +0000 UTC]
ok your welcome
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buffprincess [2019-08-05 02:20:16 +0000 UTC]
I wonder how tall they will grow 👀
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masterminder241 [2019-08-03 05:08:24 +0000 UTC]
I wonder if their argument may just end up coming together to a complete agreement to look after their 'big' brother from the bullies...and that they will love him as a brother together...🤔
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ElsieGuen In reply to masterminder241 [2019-08-03 07:05:57 +0000 UTC]
No, sorry. I don't think it will end this way.
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Raubritter [2019-08-02 12:06:05 +0000 UTC]
This is AMAZING!!!
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JGmuscle12 [2019-07-25 18:35:41 +0000 UTC]
Great start. Sounds like a story crying out for lots of unorthodox displays of strength
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iceman75 [2019-07-25 08:53:15 +0000 UTC]
I love this kind of thing, love to see competition like this between two girls who love showing off their muscles and strength in this way.
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ElsieGuen In reply to iceman75 [2019-07-25 09:37:43 +0000 UTC]
Yes. And there's more to come!
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DimensionalStrength [2019-07-23 19:10:45 +0000 UTC]
I read the first sentence... AND OMG! This is amazing! Fav!
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ElsieGuen In reply to DimensionalStrength [2019-07-23 19:54:00 +0000 UTC]
Ah yes. I try to start my stories with sentences like that. I don't always succeed, but this was a good one!
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IBP-8 [2019-07-23 11:43:55 +0000 UTC]
What a great start. Really looking forward to part two!
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ElsieGuen In reply to IBP-8 [2019-07-23 12:46:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm currently writing part 2. The 14 yo titanic twins have just arrived at Muscle Beach, where they are about to humiliate everyone.
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