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Emberheart23 — No Dawn, No Day, I'm always in this Twilight
Published: 2012-05-04 03:05:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 746; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 8
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I really don't wanna hurt your feelings. ;n;
Good Job: The background and the lighting are great. The way one light gives off a variety of colour in the glow looks very nice and I really enjoyed that part of the picture. I also think that your color scheme is well thought out and looks very nice. The way the writing is written helps carry out the picture's emotion.
Needs Work: Okay, here comes the part where I don't wanna be mean ono. Okay, so Ember's face is kind of odd. The eye shape looks a bit like her orange eye is squished into a downward slope and the green eye is bigger than the other. I know that is perspective, but I think you could downsize the green eye a bit. Also, here eyes seem really far apart with a wide nose in between. Most cats have closer together eyes with a small nose. Also, her tail looks like a horse tail type thing, and it looks kind of cut off. Also, her head looks a bit too big for her neck/chest.
None of this was meant to offend you ;A;
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note: Nothing in this critique is supposed to offend you oAo
really good, i like o3o
lets just start right off.
you must be harder on your self for anatomy, I must say. i know its your style and stuff, and you might want to keep it that way which is absolutely fine ^3^ but if you want to have better anatomy, you really need to push it o3o
the eye size wouldn't have such a big range in size, they would be barley noticeable in size difference from the angle it is at.
to the legs!
Might want to look into not making the legs up so high on them, look at muscular structures for references :3
okaythatsallbye
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Pfft XDD that was short
but helpfull ovo <3 thank you moss boss~
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I can't critique this. :U
I cannot find anything wrong with it
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It turned out so weeeeeeell!
I looove the background and the shading! c:
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AWWW DAT SONG.
I love Florence+The Machine.
Really cute picture.
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SO BEAUTIMUS!
I CLAIM.
FULL RIGHTS.
TO LOOK AT THIS PICTURE.
WHENEVER I WANT.
B)
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FAWDBAWDG
OK
YOU HAS RIGHTS LOL XD <3
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