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Emerald-Eden — Ichigo x Orihime
Published: 2010-01-09 18:59:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1699; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 248
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This is my second human drawing o-oI'd like your crits because I want to improve, but take it easy on me XD afterall, this is only my second time,
anyways, its some Bleach fanartss, and Its sayssss,
"Ichigo. I am nothing without you"
"Orihime..."
yer, idk, I think its better on paper, of course X-X
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Thank you very much ^u^
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You're welcome! ^ ^
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I will critique but I do not like this pairing... IchiRukiis so mch better in my opinion... the drawing itself is good though.
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ok I cannot actually give a critique so I would say that Ichigo's head is a bit long... its needs to be that the mouth is higher. Otherwise it is great.
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I think what seems a bit off proportionally is the fact you would see Ichigo's ear because the ear is level with the nose. Possibly thinning the back of the neck and giving him more of a shoulder would possibly help. Just some suggestions. Maybe add an adam's apple in his throat as well. I do like Orihime and the background is well done as well. I can see your style in this, and it blends well with anime/manga. I think you got the proportions of his face correct, but if your going to play around with this drawing you could try tilting the angle of the mouth, might help, might not, I'm not sure, you'd have to look and judge for yourself. Good job though, I like how much you keep improving!
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I'd say make the back of Ichigo's head a bit bigger and rounder, and it would be perfect. Great job on this!
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omg 
but i suggest making Ichigo's moutha bit higher
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I won't post a full critique, but I'll just say that proportionally something looks a bit off on Ichigo. Maybe his face is too long? Ooh or maybe his chin just comes out a little too much... Not too sure, and I'm definitely not amazing at drawing humans, but those are just my thoughts. I think Orihime looks amazing though!
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omg i luv it
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