LibrarianHero [2019-12-27 06:19:34 +0000 UTC]

it cussed at the cat
it admonished the cat. Cursing is using the bad words. This isn't cursing.

right in front of Arthur’s face as it asked the question, almost squishing against his nose.

‘Too close!’ Arthur grimaced.
If it's that close, he's probably pulling his head back. It's a normal human reaction.

artificial intelligent
artificial intelligence

look pretty
Artificial intelligence isn't something with a "look". "Was pretty impressive" is better.

looking right at her
Staring at her

‘Did the loli get infected by the bot or something? Why does everyone keep whining and getting in my face today?’ He complained inwardly.

Okay, Italics can be used for internal thought, and "complained inwardly" is redundant, as we already know he's complaining and it's internal. "Groused inwardly"?

“Wow.” Was all Arthur could say. It’s like the collective mental illness social media caused in the 21st century but worse.
Um, without attributing that to anyone- that's you talking, and out of place in the story... Make clear it is Arthur saying or thinking it.

‘pain by constriction’ (hugs and snuggles) 
This part made me laugh. Corporal cuddling!

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